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by JBMcDragon

schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* whimper.... why do you always leave us hanging? No sex? None? Not even a little bit....maybe some... *sniffle* so hot, don't know what to do...
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG yes! I love good kibs shino stories!
person Tsukiyomi
schedule May 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. You've made this an obsession of mine. This was my first real Kiba/Shino pairing. I really liked the way you wrote it. I only wish I could read more about them going back home.
person __katreusaki
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Came across this. Read it on LJ and loved it. You should have more reviews for it, and the more you have the more fan base you can get!! WOO. *reviews*
person nejinee
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I left a review before and I see it's awful =____=. I apologize. So here's my proper review. Ahem, best Shino/Kiba fic ever written. Actually, to be honest, it was my first S/K fic ever too. Ahah, but it totally convinced me that the story and pairing is just too awesome for words. Thanks for turning my eyes to this pair *loves you*. I actually read this fic at least once a week, it's that good. Kiba is too awesome in his leather and his undulating etc XD. And shino as a shy jealous guy totally worked! You kept them in character and I appreciate it . Thanks for the awesome story.
person Black Ice
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I liked thit fic lots. I'm never sure when it comes to fics where two guys are on a mission in which they have to go into a gay bar ('cause some don't really work for me,) but I liked this one. Especially Shino's character, the "not that"'s were great in defining it. I got into this KibaShino mood and couldn't find any fics that suited my taste, after I read a few paragraphs, I was like "yay, I think this fic is a good one. T_T" You don't know what this fic means to me.
person blisblop
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done.This couple is shown very competantly,above average definetly.Amusing,esp.Shino's internal dialog.Lively.I am still wondering what happened to the little red head.
person Peppermint God
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It's the first Kiba/Shino I've ever read. I love it!

~adios~
person Ruka
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this was soooooo hot! man we want more of this pairing!
person maij
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was SO, SO, SO, SO HHHHOOOOOOOTTTTT!!!! Kiba IS sex on legs. All I can say is THANK YOU!!!