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Good chapter wonder what going to happen next :D

WHOO! LOOK AT THAT! only his few first weeks in school and already boys are fighting over him. That's so CUTE! And look, Little Gaara is growing up to become like a (somewhat) lady's man for Naruto. heh. Sasuke is getting more fiesty and Neiji is finally into the battle. YAY! Oh, this is just so exciting, I think i'll die from excitment before the next chapter!! (beep...beep.....beep....beeeeep~dies) no! can't die! must live and read! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER! ARG! ^__^

XD XD XD!!!! update update! hehehe... i LOVE this chappie!! *hugs*

I so love your story! I do hope you update so0n! :) hugs and kisses!ciao

It's a good movie. You should see it sometime...>> Those penguins... *shakes head* Anyway, good job on the story so far! I'm lovin' the rivalry with Gaara and Sasuke. ^-^ Still, poor Naru-chan! *huggles a cup ramen* Man...>> Sakura's a bitch and needs to die. Preferrably by the hands of her 'boyfriend'. ^^ Just kidding...>> Although, that WOULD be funny as hell.

The possesivness! XD Woot! I really want to know what happens!

hah! This chapter was funny...keep up the good work!

Of course I do agree. Would Naruto be the hero of the story if he was weak? He's not. And he shows his emotions.
I have to tell you, I didn't really like this chapter. Not that it was bad, but it's already a little unnerving when Sasuke and Neji have a glaring contest, so when it's the three os them it's somewhat too much. Naruto is not a lotery prize.
In fact the whole Sasuke, Neji and Gaara running after Naruto and glaring at each other is a bit old. But I think I already told you that.
There's a fanfic on ff.net that's called "the new guy". It's a good fanfic, well written with long chapters, but during all the 20 (or something like that) first chapters it's all like that. So, even if I keep reading it, I think it's what made me bored with this kind of plot.
I'll keep reading yours even if you continue like this, but, well, please, don't do it all the time.
But, what's good is that there is a real difference between his relationship with them. He's friend with Neji from the beginning, Gaara knows his secret and he hates Sasuke, hahaha!
I'm still crossing my fingers that Neji and Gaara will fell in love with each other. Something like:

Sasue/Gaara/Neji: Dobe/Naruto! I promise it won't hurt (too much)
Naruto: Kyaaa! You are all lousy jerks! Untie me!
Gaara: I'm his keeper, so back off!
Neji: Maybe, but he likes me more. He was friend with me from the first day we met!
Gaara: He tld me his secret! And he cried on me
Neji: Yes, but...What do you think you're doing, Uchiha?
Sasuke:* froze with his hand in Naruto's pants*.....
Gaara: Don't touch him! He's mine!
Neji: No mine!
Sasuke: Why's that *smirk, cross arms*
Gaara: We already told it!
Neji: Yeah, so what's YOUR reason?
Sasuke: Well, I'm hot, handsome, athletic, smart-
Gaara/Neji: We are too!
Gaara: Yes! Look at Neji! He has beautiful long hairs, incredibles white eyes, a nice body, he's the SC class president, he's nice-
Neji: Gaara has awsome red hairs, incredible green eyes, a hot body, respected (feared) by everyone-
Gaara/Neji: *stop to look at each other*.....
Sasuke: *Lift an eyebrow and smirk*
Gaara/Neji: *making out*
Sasuke: Right...So, Naru-chan, where were we?

What? You don't like this plan? Ow, it's too bad! *grin*.
Hum, I'd like to see Naruto blushs from an embarassing situation in the next chapter, you think you could do that?
Well, keep the good work! Sakura bashing *lift SasuSaku haters banner*! And good luck! Oh, and you should read the fics of this author, you might like them!
Ja ne!

gawd I love your writing! SO fscking witty! thanks for updating again!