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by godofcontradiction

person Draco
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Please keep wrighting.

Draco
person Name
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey make neji and garaa a couple no point leaving them alone and miserable please ?
and plus their complex character makes it more challenging to put them together
person LadyApollonia
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE!! I got so lost in that last chapter! It was so poetic at the end! Love!!!!!!!!! It was so beautiful! I personally think that Neiji should save Naruto & RUIN the Harunos! Mwahahahaha!!! ahem. Sorry. But that's still what I think. Yay for Gaara! *pets the little Gaara on her phone* I love him. ^_^ Absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter! And I'm sorry that I don't have any constructive criticism. I got so caught up in how you described things, any mistake you may have made (if you made any at all) didn't show up on my radar.
person name
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Put neji and garaa together no point in leaving them alone and miserable and plus
their complex character makes them more interesing to read about
person Terry
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Poor poor Naruto. I wonder if you can blush to death? I can't wait to be the class' reaction to Sasuke's statement or if they can put two and two together. I love that you chose the SasukexNaruto, but I hope there's some wooing from the other two before then
person DazeWolf
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You and your...your..your thing! The skills! They fly all around me when I read your story but I can't catch them! Jerkface! *glee* I love you! xD So pretty! This chapter was for sure my favorite! The dialogue and the imagery and the last few sentances were like awesomeness in its purest of forms! x3 Please keep writing! And don't stop! I swear if you end this story before it's over I'll-I'll...*grr* I'll be sad! *loves* Yay! ^^
person Kali S.
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I've decided. -_- Sakura and her father are going to burn eternally in hell. Yup. *nods* That's what they'll do. I'm thinking......worst level of Dante's Inferno.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter had an absolutely adorable ending -- very sweet and touching. Although it's evil of you to add the angst of some Gaa/Naru when the story's going to end up as a Sasu/Naru, lol. ^^ Again, very well done -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!
person MidnightMoon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw this story is really sweet. Kind of like a Cinderella story I guess? Lol well I really like reading this alot so hurry and update!
person sinsoftime
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeels* yay!!!! new chapter!!!!!!!!.................*pouts* but now I wanna know what happens........WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!