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*chuckle* Just kidding about the toaster...

I really love how this story is developing... O_o GaaNaru? SasuNaru?? ...^__^ GaaNaruSasu!!!!! XD

I'd go for it. *points to his last suggestion* Totally. ^^

Camui

what a great way to start my lazy life of boredom! Naruto totally rocks! especially with our little sasu-shan! oohhhh please update soon! I love it and Im dreading to hear it end *the chapter, i mean...* you should start an update alert! tell us when you're planning one ok? ^__^

Just bust out the moves whenever your happy and let your body do the work! woot! Ahhhhhhh! Naru-chan! *glomps* I feel for him! You gotta love him!

:o Poor Naruto.. Are you going to kill Sakura's parents? Please? Can you? Maybe her too? :D

I love that poem ^.^ Hehe.

Poor poor Naruto...damn Sakura...and her father is so stupid, not even listening to poor Naruto.

that was so so sad... poor gaara AND naruto. he's right, they shouldn't be lonely. i ahte how naruto is so sad but i will say this, plz make the haruno family suffer for their cruelty. personaly, they should suffer, suffer until they beg for death and release but don't give it to them. i jsut wanna... hug the boys and be their new mother!! or maybe a big sister/mother ^^ this touched my heart :)

Yeah....Naruto and Gaara seem more like brothers than anything else. I really can't see them as a couple. I thought it was Gaara at first that was talking to Naruto. 2 points for me! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!!

KAWAII in a sadistic kinda way.........

Son of a mother fucking bitch! What the fuck is his problem beating up a minor for a lying whore! Slutura is such a coward, runs to big-ass daddy with lies when she doesn't like something. Well you know what whore? You're just lucky Naruto didn't call the cops and press charges for child abuse. Which reminds me, why doesn't he? Or maybe he is ashamed of it and is scared of what could happen to him afterwards? But then again, I can't stand it that those bastards can get away with it. So snce Naruto and Gaara are more or less on the same boat maybe you can make Kiba find out and then tell the authorities like any good friend would (not to mention get a damned good lawyer to take money from the HOrunos, preferably make them bankrupt, and have Slutura placed in an orfanage because her parents are a VERY bad example and not fit to havethe title at all). Sorry, as you noticed whenever something bad happens to one of my favorite characters I tend to think of all the possibilities to 'avenge' them. Must be a side effect of being an ex-kid of the class that was always picked on. Although I did get rich last year by doing the idiots homework for 5$ per exercice plus interest if they don't pay right away, so it's all good. As you can see I'm very twisted and vindictive so you don't have to take my suggestions if it goes against your plot. Although it would make me very happy. Besides, considering what a spoiled brat Slutura (that is what I will refer to her from now on, in fact I am ashamed of sharing the same gender as that bitch) is I'd say that she is kind of girl that could commit paricide just because thing don't go her way. In fact, something similar to that happened. A girl wanted to meet her boyfriend but her mother wouldn't let her so the girl, who very spoiled, killed her mother. I can see this happening with the bitch only with a couple of diffferences: Slutura is obsessed with (the poor soul) Sasuke, she asks (more like demands) her parents to make him her fiance (NOW the poor guy has got the best reason in the world to commit suicide), Sasuke (is he an orphan? I don't think you mentioned it) rejects her because she is just another stupid fangirl or his parents don't (want to torture their son) find the HOrunos to be rich enough or something (the point is that the offer is REJECTED, haha), the parents come back and tell Slutura the knews. She loses it and accuses her parents of lying and as selfish bastards (for once she will be telling the truth) that want to keep her from her 'prince charming' and just kills them. Naruto freaks out (who wouldn't) and calls the police. Hopefully when she goes into jail she will get raped while we're there (it does happen at prison, the only hay that you can get accomodations is if you're loaded). I never really liked her for many reasons: ONE she treats Naruto like shit and doesn't respect him for no real, ralid reason; TWO she says that she 'loves' Sasuke but she just has the mother of all infatuations and because of this, can't think on her own; and THREE what the hell was her problem giving up her best friend fora crush that isn't valid, at least Ino was willing to keep her friendship with her despite the fact that they both liked the same guy, not to mention the fact that if it weren't for Ino, Slutura would have been picked on by everyone her entire life.
So this is my little rant/analysis (if you culd call it that). Great story you kept the characters in character and they're very well writen. I hope that you update soon, 'cause this story ROCKS!

I swear to god i almost cried when i read that chapter i..i...i excuse me....