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by godofcontradiction

person Likana
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*tear tear* Waahhhh!!! That was soo sweet!! The Gaara and Naruto connection is so sweet and heartbreaking! I'm in luv with this fic! I have only one request though...revenge and I mean REVENGE on sakura, not necessarily physical but more humiliation ;) hehe I'm evil...Muwahahaha!

Btw: You can prolly tell that I'm pretty high but could you take that request into consideration? Thankies! and I agree with one of the reviewers, please don't abandon this fic. You've reallii got something here.
person Trekiael
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Angsty chapter. That was to be expected, after all, we already know that Naruto's life is not easy and it give a reason to be closer to Gaara, they are the same. I think it's great you didn't make him pass out, it's too easy. Anyway, that was very good. You know, another author told me I was psychik (maybe you know her stories, she write under the penname Dead on Arrival in ff.net and Ded in aff) and I told her that no, I don't think I am, it's just that gret spirit meat, don't you think so? Well, that's good to know we agree on some points. Oh, and I definitely don't think that you make Naruto a weak uke. Being cute and sensitive doesn't mean weak. Just that sometimes you crack down crying, and when your life is a fucking hell and you're tired because of so much beating, so, yes, it's normal. Naruto is a uke notheless! I think for now he doesn't really understand what's happening and how to stand or react. But for me, I think he has great potential to become a very seductive one, one with the capacity of making Sasuke's hormones go wild, well, don't know if you'll use it, but I think so. You can make him blushing (he's cute when he does) resisting, being scandalize, shocked, or seductive, I love all of that, but please, don't make him be the seme, never. Nice thing this chapter was longer, ling chapters are yummy! Anyway, good luck! Ja ne!
person blood water
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAIIII! SUPER KAWAIII CHAPPIE!!
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bwahaahahaha! oOo by the way.. Is Naruto going to end up being s defenceless UKE?!
I BEG you! please..pleeeaaase don't make Naruto an incapable dansel in distress!!

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I have another suggestion for a pairing! How about NejiGaara?! *sigh I don't see enough of those around..
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Anyways PERFECT chapter and keep updating! ^^

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*holds giant poster with the words "UPDATE SOON!!" on it*
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Ja ne!
-bloodwater-
person Sora Jr
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you liked the poem. I am just happy I could make you happy!! I am just glad to review for such a wonderful story with a great auther.
I can't wait untill the next chapter just so I can review again. Your the greatest!!!!
-see ya
person diamond_princess2006
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heeee sasuke's sexy without even trying ! well what's naruto going to do about this... hope to see an update soon
person powder07blossom
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So sad... *sniffs* You're so awful... :( Joke!!! I LOVE IT!!! A little pain in the major characters is inevitable... It helps build character...

Can you make it so that Gaara beats Sakura? :P Not that guys are supposed to beat up girls... It's just that Sakura deserves it, that bitch!

WAAHH!!! I love this fic!!! DO NOT, and i mean, DO NOT ABANDON THIS FIC! Please... Coz a lot of authors have killed theirs, seems like the thing nowadays, and I hate that... Grr...

If you leave this fic, I'm gonna run after you wielding a katana ^_^
person Tsunaide
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHOCOLATE FOR EVERYONE!!! Nah,....i'll run out of monmey if I did that but I'll buy a GIANT one just for you!!!I LOVE YOU FOR MAKING THIS STORY SO GOOD!!!XDXDXDYAY SASUNARU!!!BWAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA!!!


soz ran out of chocolate for real and replaced it with peanut butter xD!
person Mochi~
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I would like a Neji x Naruto, but don't worry 'cause Sasuke x Naruto is good too! REALLY good.

I'm going to stalk this fic until the end of it, so don't you worry. ;D Thanks, and a happy reading I had! MOAHAHA, Sasuke is so evil! This was a wonderful and clever chapter, it made me beam all over. Must be my favourite this far. *gives you loots of cookies*
person krickets
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh finals are STUPID thank go im graduated from college already

i HATED finals

anyways THANK GOD you finally updated i was going CRAZY

literally

i think between wednesday-friday there was maybe fifteen stories updated or added
and most of them were crap
and here i was all alone on my day off with absoloutly NOTHING good to read!

AHHHH! i just about threw a hissey out the door and opted for coniption
person Reiko
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fine fine, I'll call you cookie. xD -hands you a cookie-

Another awesome chapter as I've come to expect. The girls grate on my nerves, but that's come to be expected too... (: