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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't matter anymore...~sigh~
-mutters said bad about those damn Sasu/Naru fan-
Like i said before i refuse to read a story that has Sasu/Naru as the final pairing,
this is a really well written story and i'm really disappointed that i have to stop reading this b/c it's now a Sasu/Naru oh well it can't be helped :/
whenever you have another story that doesn't have Sasu/Naru i'll get that.
I just can't stand to read Sasu/Naru anymore or ever -.-
this is my farwell to you, and this story, i just can't read it from this point now...
goodluck....and....goodbye :'(
-mutters said bad about those damn Sasu/Naru fan-
Like i said before i refuse to read a story that has Sasu/Naru as the final pairing,
this is a really well written story and i'm really disappointed that i have to stop reading this b/c it's now a Sasu/Naru oh well it can't be helped :/
whenever you have another story that doesn't have Sasu/Naru i'll get that.
I just can't stand to read Sasu/Naru anymore or ever -.-
this is my farwell to you, and this story, i just can't read it from this point now...
goodluck....and....goodbye :'(
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0.0; hey sorry I didn't review for the last chappie ^^; just a bit too busy in the last week and so XD yea' Well YAY for chapter 8!!! XD I laughed out loud when Naruto had to read a poem lol my sister thought it was wierd that I was laughing and it was creeping me out 0.0 and then I was smiling the whole time when Sasuke had to do his XD and in the end I was like lol Naruto you have an admirer!!! XD atleast his the only blonde in the class 0.0 what if Ino was there!?!?! >.> that would be oober scary XD atleast Sakura wasn't there or she might figure it out and get Naruto 0.0...XD FAN GIRLS MAKE THE WORLD GO ROUND~... -.- partly I think...
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) Loved the poem Kiba pick for Naruto, very funny. Also loved the reaction Naruto has to Sasuke's poem. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snickers*
thats great ^-^
thats great ^-^
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad the majority wanted sasu/naru...
anyway, you're doing a wonderful job with the story. you update fast too.. thats a +10000000000... lol. The interactions that you make between the characters are interesting. It makes us readers wait eagerly for more. I hope to see more of this.
anyway, you're doing a wonderful job with the story. you update fast too.. thats a +10000000000... lol. The interactions that you make between the characters are interesting. It makes us readers wait eagerly for more. I hope to see more of this.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* un ^^;. Omg...I love that poem that Sasuke read including the one where it's actually dedicated to him! I hope the girls will shut up and think for a second who he dedicated to..^^;; Sorry, I'm just amazed how the girls doesn't even think except for being nuts over Sasuke... As for Naruto kun, I hope he just knows that Sasuke's really, really giving him hints to him knowing that Sasuke likes him.^^ ne, I can't wait for the next chapter!! *blushes*
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Christ. I actually groaned and screamed out loud when that chapter ended! How the *bleeep* could you end it there?!?!? I mean, *BLEEEEEP!!!!* That poem was so... hawt. And... *nosebleed* Dear LORD continue this soon, or else I'll... *looks around awkwardly* BLUDGEON YOU WITH MY TOASTER OF DOOM! X_X Maybe not...
Anyway love the story. Not many people can get me to be vocal whenever I read their stories. Kudo's.
*Camui*
Anyway love the story. Not many people can get me to be vocal whenever I read their stories. Kudo's.
*Camui*
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* yet another sasu/nara fic, gah, i love the pairing, but there's so many of 'em. Bah, well any ways, the poetry was an intresting way to get things rolling more steadily into the pairing, I like it.
Also I have a suggestion for what you could do for the people who's pairing didn't win, you could run a poll for side pairings, everyone loves a chance to tell their favorite pairings out of the way, and with the most popular out of the way it might be a bit closer of a run. But, I digress, it is your fic after all. Looking forward to the next chapter.
oh, and on a side note, i've done some stupid things in the kitchen as well, for example, i burnt my nose while boiling water once, don't know how i did it though. What makes me being a klutz in the kittchen even worse is that my mom is a cook. Apparently cullinary skills aren't genetic.
Also I have a suggestion for what you could do for the people who's pairing didn't win, you could run a poll for side pairings, everyone loves a chance to tell their favorite pairings out of the way, and with the most popular out of the way it might be a bit closer of a run. But, I digress, it is your fic after all. Looking forward to the next chapter.
oh, and on a side note, i've done some stupid things in the kitchen as well, for example, i burnt my nose while boiling water once, don't know how i did it though. What makes me being a klutz in the kittchen even worse is that my mom is a cook. Apparently cullinary skills aren't genetic.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate leaving short reviews but sadly I'm doing a little mid-winter cleaning and don't have a lot of time to spare. Great chapter. It was lovely & I love the incorporation of poems in there. Good choice of the ones you did use, as well.
My main comment about the Shakespearan sonnet you chose was that "Shall I compare thee", along with the first 75-ish of Shakespeare's sonnets, were all written to a man. The ones that followed that were written to a woman. I just find it funny that the sonnet/poem that has become most associated with love (and that would be heterosexual love, to be specific) is a sonnet written to a man. So yeah, that was pointless & its quite possible that you already knew this.
So great choice of poems, great chapter. My only curiousity about the chapter is Naruto's stopping where he did in the Browning poem, possibly the word "father" and "death" capturing something a bit too close to home for him, maybe? I dunno but great job. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
My main comment about the Shakespearan sonnet you chose was that "Shall I compare thee", along with the first 75-ish of Shakespeare's sonnets, were all written to a man. The ones that followed that were written to a woman. I just find it funny that the sonnet/poem that has become most associated with love (and that would be heterosexual love, to be specific) is a sonnet written to a man. So yeah, that was pointless & its quite possible that you already knew this.
So great choice of poems, great chapter. My only curiousity about the chapter is Naruto's stopping where he did in the Browning poem, possibly the word "father" and "death" capturing something a bit too close to home for him, maybe? I dunno but great job. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CX awww... a poem dedicated to naruto... i wish i were blond now!