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by godofcontradiction

person the_True_Silver
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sasunaru all the way!!! hot... stupid sakura... but i like bashing tha ti can wait patiently for... yes.. oh so patiently...

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person idiot_lord
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! IT'S FINALLY HERE!! All hail the new update! (bow) WE'RE NOT WORTHY! (bow) WE'RE NOT WORTHY! (boy) BUT WE STILL WANT TO READ IT!! yup! This is getting even better! Sasuke just announce his target is Naruto and Naruto is really bad at poetry! WHOO HOO! WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?!~?! WE HAVE ABSOLUTY NO CLUE!! PLEASE UPDATE, O MIGHTY ONE! (bow and slam face to floor)
person MultifacetedTune
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very creative idea, and very well done. I love the creativity you've put into this story, and the characterizations/descriptions are wonderful! ^__^ Can't wait to find out what happens next -- keep up the good work and update ASAP!!
person Stupidity Unleashed
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the dedication^^ I REALLY liked this chapter. That whole poetry thing was awesome! I remember when I had to do that in class. I read O Captain, My Captain too. Hehe. I'm so glad SasuNaru won! SQUEE!! CAN'T WAIT, CAN'T WAIT, CAN'T WAIT! I hate to be annoying but please update soon. That's probably the last thing you wanna hear, rite? XP Sorry.
person Trekiael
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy my reviews give you ideas, it's good to know that your reviews are useful. Well, good chapter again. Haha, Sasuke sure love to embarass Naruto! Saying a poem like this in front of the all class and making it clear it's for him! I think Iruka should make them work together on it, you know, "Naruto, to improve your reading skills in the poetry domain, you are going to work on it with Sasuke who gave us a beautiful reading last time, and you're gonna make it in front of the class", but maybe this kind of thing is a little overused. You know what could be cool? Using some things that happen in the manga, like some fight (without necessary making them being fight, but an other way to compet) or relationship between some characters (I want to see Sai! That is, if you've read the scan of the manga, if not, you can always go to this adress to have them in ddl, there's an english version (I'm french, and that's a french site) :http://naruto.japflap.com/index.php?page=media,dl,manga.) Is Itachi going to play a part. I'd love to see him give a big wind to Sakura. And, oh yeah! Forgot, Yaoooh! SasuNaru won! There is less and less SasuNaru fics these times, so that's really good! Hope you'll make it long! A nice long story with a lot of Sakura bashing and Naruto blushing and Sasuke smirking and well, you got the point. And please, not too much on the romantic side to Sasuke, more on the perv' one, he's not a serial lover, more a pervert bastard. Anyway, good luck! Ja ne! ps: I still vote NejiGaara if you're up for it too.
person sansty
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!! LOVED THAT!! I LOVE WHERE YOU ARE GOING WITH THIS AND IC AN'T WAIT FOR MORE! *waits patiently on seat*
person Vox
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=^^=
So pretty, with the poetry... Poor, poor Naru-chan so confused. Nice chapter, if a bit short.
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love SasuNaru ^.^ Man, you have a nice taste in poetry...and music! I love System of A down! Great chapter. I love the fact that you update often.
person Vox
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And by the way, it would be reeaally nice to see a Lee/Gaara pairing. Please, at least consider it? please?
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you know what I forgot to say? That chapter reminded me a tiny bit of the movie 'Dead Poets Society' I love that movie so so much!