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for This way to the stars

by godofcontradiction

person mieran
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome,
to sweet, i enjoyed it, but one question?? Are you
gonna make Neji and gaara like naruto too??
If you hadnt decided then can you not make them all love
NAruto cuz they always get hurt,
but anyways I lvoe this chappy
cuz i adore poetry
person Iishtafreakyo
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I noticed your story, "This Way To The Stars" and thought that since I was bored, I would go ahead and read it. As I read through it I realized that your story is very well thought out. I enjoyed what you have written and I would like to point out something. ^^

Your story needs a beta. I'm sorry if this sounds... Rude... But there are glaring spelling mistakes and other things that would make your story that much better. I'm not trying to be cruel to you by telling you that you need a second source to check your chapters before posting them...

I'm just offering you a beta. Personally I would LOVE to beta your story, fix your chapters and help you with upcoming ones. ^_~

Please reply as quickly as possible.


~Freak
person clowangel
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Made it to the deadline!! O_O; NEJINARU ONEGAI-SHIMASU!!! Please? -_- Too many SasuNaru's around and I've practically read all the good ones and even some of the average ones.. Meanwhile NejiNaru's not as easy to find. :(

I'm kinda getting scared it will end up SasuNaru like many other fanfics so I'm praying it'll be a NejiNaru.
person MrsHeeroYuy
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Neji!!!!!!! :)
person Blaky
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sigh! I sooooo wanted a GaaraXNaruto fic!ç_______ç guess it will remain a dream!
person Shinobi-Of-The-Mist
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it is currently 9:59pm central January 13th 2006... so that means you wont have much votes/reviews.... well i say NEJIxNARUTO!!!! i barely see them as a couple and i think sasuke is a bastard... and gaara is wierd. *face scrunches up* hes reallllllllllllllly wierd... please for godsakes DO NEJIxNARU!!! I DONT CARE IF SASUKE-BASTARDxNARU HAS MORE VOTES... my vote counts as 300 right, right? *insert grin here* cmon, u kno u love nejixnaruto? dont yah? dontcha?
person Tenshi
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SasuNaru! SasuNaru! SasuNaru! SasuNaru! Go SasuNaru!! ^^
p.s. When will you update?
person Reader.
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn great chapter, hell, i just read all the chapters!
I vote for Neji/Naru b/c there are sooooooooooooooo many Sasu/Naru out there
BE THE FIRST, BE THE ONE AND THE ONLY ORIGNAL AUTHOR THAT MAKES IT OTHER THAN SASU/NARU!
it's all up to you Cookie-sama!!!
I was fighting with some loser that thinks there so smart, and like i said to them i'm gonna say about your reviwers, well some of them
THERE SAD SASUKE-TARDS! Gaara or Neji are better for Naru-chan.
I haven't seen i good story like yours in a long time, i just like the triangles but it always have to same outcome, Sasuke-teme winning Naruto.
Personally from what i was reading, other than your a really good writer is that Neji would be perfect for Naruto, i don't know why but it's like there cute together.
plus i see where your making it Sasu/Naru in that last chapter you seeking devil you :P
Please keep up the great work and i'm gonna be a fan of yours your writting is just to good to be true..i think you make some money off this shh~~but don't tell anyone i said that lol
i can't wait for the next chapter~~
person naru
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SASUNARU! thankz ^^
person RieKa
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i VOTE for SASUxNARU!! weeee.. xD