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by godofcontradiction

person Jadejj
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I vote SasukexNaruto or NarutoxNeji or even all three boys :P NarutoxSasukexNeji have fun typing your story It's good so far.
person Saki
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love that chapter where Naruto's friends were in shocked just because Neji smiled and actually talked to Naruto even before Kiba and the others met.^^ Sasuke seems really jealous though just watching Naruto interact. I do feel sorry for him due to him having a crush, I think he does, on Naruto.lol but I really want to read more and see how the story comes out. As for the food fight, it's Kiba's fault.lol poor Naruto getting ketchup on his shirt. ....Voting...okay...now I'm in between thinking of voting for SasuNaru or NejiNaru...x.x; but I can't choose that much....However, I'll think about choosing SasuNaru since I'm a SasuNaru fan because I'm only a little bit NejiNaru since I only read a few stories that contains them together.^^;
person powder07blossom
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm gonna vote! Sasuke/Gaara/NejixNaruto foreveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrr!!!!! :P... I seriously love this fic! It's a good thing that most people in my house are asleep right now so they didn't see me laughing and giggling on my own. They may mistake me for an autistic... :P Anyway, I'm serious about that vote...I want to see smut for all the aforementioned characters...Please :D ...But a SasuNaru pair ending would be really great, dontyathink?...hehe...I'm a big SasuNaru fan...and I simply adore love triangles...squares...Love your fic! Please update soon! :D
person KaiwaiiKoneko
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Koneko:UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! SasuxNaru plz. Plz make them those two a couple. Don't listen to the other 'I hate SasuxNaru' ppl. They could just go and fuck themselves those horny stupid jealous bitches! *panting from rating*
Karuna/Abunai:O.O
Koneko:Sorry about that ppl. I'm always nice and sweet
Karuna:*coughs*
Koneko:*glares* Anyway I'm nice and all id that when ppl have a problem with Sasuke and Naruto couples I get pissy and bitchy. Is just that my fav couples are SasuxNaru no matter wat. They just belong 2gether. Besides Sasuke is suppoused to be cold, mean, and rude. That lightens up the story. I only want Sasuke with Naruto or me. If I ever write a fic that is. But if I do write a fic, me and NAruto will always share Sasuke. Right Naruto?
Naruto:Right
Koneko:I mean I'm sweet and you're nice, Sasuke can love two ppl right?
Naruto:Yeah
Sasuke:Hello Pussycat. Hello Dobe.
Naruto/Koneko:AHHH SASUKE! *glomps him*
Sasuke:@.@
Abunai:What my kittens is trying to say is. Even though she also like ItachixSasuke couples, or fav couples is SasukexHerself and SasukexNaruto
Karuna:Right. SO plz update and put SasukexNaruto 2gether plz for my Yami's sake before she decides to hunt you down. And I know she always keeps her promise. *remembering that time she beat up Anzu for touching her brother Yami when he already told her to fuck off* *shudders*
Abunai:*also shudders*
person BlacKat
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0.0 wow >w< I LOVE your story!!!! Very original and catchy ^^ lol and very funny scenes 0.0 and Naruto has made friends!!! ^^ YAY for him!! XD Naruto is also a...hmm ^^ he's a cheery yet also sad boy magnet lol wierd but that's how I think of him a bit well he's got Sasuke, Gaara, and Neji's attention -.- and unfortunately Sasuke got Sakura's attention XD well since votings up I'd have to say Sasuke/Naruto pairing ^^ nothing against the other pairings but this one's my all time favorite yaoi pairing >;) well can't wait to see what's gonna happen next for Naruto XD I LOVE RAMEN!!!
person Firestarburst
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. It's witty and funny. I'm afraid I'm a smidge stuck between NejiNaru and SasuNaru. It's so hard to choose eeeh!! Fine if I must choose SasuNaru has my vote with Neji acting as big bro and best friend. Also Gaara also becoming one Naru's close friend. Can't wait for an update.
person tes
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the way it plqys out like real life, funny too, i hope this ends up 30 chapters long or something^..^ update soon...like now!
person Enma
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really enjoyed this story! I loved it. Naruto is utterly funny, you just have to love him.

Well keep up the awesome story writing

Enma
person inu on crack
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SasukexNaruto plzz!!!
person narutofan716
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Neji in this story so... NejiNaru please?