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by godofcontradiction

person Reiko
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Indeed. xD Food for thought.

Another awesome che-app-pii-terrr. Poor Shikamaru. Having to deal with so many troublesome things.

Is there gonna be fights between Sasuke, Neji and Gaara now? D= I don't like that idea, but it IS your story, so I'll keep on reading. And grooving. -dance-

Also I vote SasukexNaruto. -drool-

Whee. Lmao and as promised - hands packaged love-
person liankitty
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... there are just so many reviews, I was shocked and pleased to see the fic that I've been enjoying get such high approval; good work! I'm so happy for Naruto, things may be difficult for him but friends will make all the difference. Neji is awesome, he sort of comes across as the stern but gentle older brother; he has too many responsibilities so seeing Naruto make him happy is very sweet. I really hope Sakura gets a beating; she's really asking for it and not just for her behaviour towards Naruto, her whole attitude sucks.
This is cute and great and gets extra marks for the frequent updates!
person yks
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Okay. I agree, he is human and breaksdowns happen...just dont make him whimpy =P. But I still have to say, you are doing a really good job with this fic. And the updating so quick! *Awwing and stars in my eyes*

I am voting for Neiji x Naruto (but in my preverted mind, i really want a threesome of neiji x naruto x sasuke...hehehe *sweatdrops*).

And as for Gaara, I do sorta feel sorry for him like the other reviewers aforementioned...but I just dont like the pairing... I think what he needs (because of his past and all) is really a platonic love. I think I will like to see that happen. And as for Sakura she has redeeming characteristics...make her save-able for in the future (like Naruto saving her for the nth time to change her opinion). Though, teen girls can be unusually cruel... We just some thoughts running through my mind...

Good Luck!
person the_true_Silver
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ur getting me adicted to this fic... it's got wonderful plot and lots of potential growth... i hope it's a sasunaru ending!!

Silver
person Niuu
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omfg!
This must be NejiNaru!
NeeeejiNaaaruuu!

I really like SasuNaru, but i like Nejinaru more! >D
Also... there is SO MANY SasuNaru... even GaaNaru in more popular than NejiNaru!
So this must be NejiNaru!

Argh... Neji in your fic is uuh... sweet, cute, wonderful, charming...
I just want to glomp him *hugs Neji plushie*
person mitziginger
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I just wanted to let you know that I really am enjoying your fanfiction so far. The characters are fairly IC, and you have given a warning about the Sakura bashing. You have found a way to make this storyline fresh and interesting. It isn't just another one High School Fic. Your writing style is definitely captivating and draws the reader in. I just have one warning for you: be careful about how you portray Naruto. Remember that he has his own faults as well. I believe that if you write in his tendency to prank, be rude, and disrespect teachers/authority figures, you will have a well-rounded and absoluetly wonderful character. I loved the interaction between Naruto, Gaara, and Sasuke. The banter is great, and totally believable. And to cast my vote, I would love to see Naruto and Gaara get together, with an "angsty admiring from afar but not making a move" Neji. Long description, I know. Please keep up the good work. I cannot wait to read the following chapters!
person hecate
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very enjoyable story! You've done a great job with the characters. They still retain the unique characteristics that drew me into the Naruto universe and yet feel very IC with your plotline. I can easily buy Naruto's quieter, more subdued personality around Sakura as him not wanting to create more problems in an already uncomfortable home life (something I am sure most people can emphasis with). I am looking forward to seeing this story develop.

Now for my vote for pairings: Sasuke/Naruto (my all time favorite Naruto pairing)

Though I won't object to any of the pairings. I like Naruto paired with any of the men in the Naruto universe (whether Naruto is the uke/seme depends on pairings; I have a hard time believing Sasuke would be uke).
person mitsune
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
after reading this chapter i therefore conclude that sauxnaru is the pefect pair on the planet, i vote sasunaru
person Suki
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude... SasuNaru all the way =) but any of the options would be fine. You're Sakura is a total bitch, and she needs to have this rubbed in her face. Plus the family dynamic would be really interesting if Sakura was vindictive and told her parents (assuming they're homophobic) I think it would be great if you had Naruto join the soccer club, and totally kick ass, and get named co-captain, just to piss off Sasuke. That could be an avenue for them to get closer. *winks*
person tic tac
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sasukeXnaruto....
more sasuke/naruto action! pleaseee.. =[