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by godofcontradiction

person Reyn
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hooray! In that case, I'll add in yet /another/ vote for Sasuke and Naruto!

LoL. For a second there I forgot what fic I was reading. Right before I went to read yours I saw a review mentioning a Christmas oneshot for NaruSasu, and for some odd reason I thought I was reading that, so I was totally and utterly confused for a moment...ah, I need some serious R and R.
person mitsune
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAHHH!!!! just one more bishi to go and the nejigaarsasunaru tria- i mean square is about to be completed, i wonder how neji-sama and naruto-kun are going to meet, during soccer practice? when naru-chan is lost and he needs directions? or when he goes to the restroom and neji-sama gets a HUGE dose of love at first sight? kyaaa!!!! so much possibilities, im actually a big fan of sasunaru but when there's a jealous party involved it makes the story more better, so introduce neji-sama quickly to get the party started, gambatte! ^_^.
person Maria
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really really cute! I very much love how this fic is coming along. Your characterizations are interesting to read, the boys as boys without the shadow of being a ninja over them. And Soccer is the best! The scary Sakura bugs me (a lot) but I realize that you need a bad guy. Hmm, I'd like to vote for Neji, because there is a depressing lack of good NejiNaru fanfic (and this is a good, cute fic!). However, the SasuNaru is just so canon, it's weird to think of anything else. And Gaara is just so cool! So, anyway you go, I'll keep reading, but please please keep Neji (and Hinata, maybe?) in the story, because they don't get near enough love.

You rock. Go Kiba. Please update!
person fire
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey dude!!!!

there, are you happy?
i took the time to review ur fic!!!!
it's cool!!!
i like it!!!
bring sasuke out na!!!! hehe
hah!!! i'm hyper!!!!
gaara is the hottest guy on anime earth....
or maybe sasuke but i still love gaara!!!
:)
bye!!! c u in class sun?!?
-fire
p.s. kilala mo b ako?????
person nanomi
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic.....:) It's sweet and I feel so sorry for Naruto. XDDD
As for pairings...mmm...
I would like Sasukexnaruto (classic XD) -or- nejixnaruto.
Keep up the good work!!
person Alexis
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please keep writing. I seriously feel liked slapping the stupid pink bitch. I'm glad you're not going to make Gaara the bad guy..I just love him. I hope this turns out to be SasuNaru. Um...if it does do you think you could pair Neji and Gaara together??
person MeeraMeeraluv
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o I love you :D And your story ^^ It's so awesome! ^^ I can't wait til next chaper -lovelovelove-
person yks
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So good! I like it a whole bunch. At first I wasn't too sure because of the description but you know, never judge a book by its cover (or in this case a fic by its preview). When I get my act together I am soooo recommending this story. I like how is funny and engaging yet true to characters. Not a big fan of the whole angsty genre (tho there are some that are good, too) so yours is definitely refreshing! And kudos for updating so quick! As for pairings I am caught between sasunaru and neijinaruto. Sasuke with the whole rival and best friend thing while Neiji has the whole silent caring "my fate was changed by meeting Naruto" thing. Hard choice...(sasu/naru/neiji? hehehehe) Anyhows, I do have one concern, I am not a big fan of making Naruto an emotionally weak character. If anything he is stronger than anyone in that department. Thanks again for creating such a great fic! yks
person mgp
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, Neji come back~! I miss him... Sasuke is annoying. He's rude for no reason to Naruto. *sigh* I love those nice Sasuke ones...
person sinsoftime
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE DON'T JUST END IT THERE! UPDATE! UPDATE! PLEASE?!?!?!?!?! I think this whole story is just so cute! And it had so many apiring possibilities!!!!!!!!!!! I will check avidly for updates! ^_^