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by godofcontradiction

person dakara
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weeeee amazing chapter *giggles*...........omg...I sound like some crazy person..........wait......I am a crazy person....kekekekeke...and SASUNARU!!!!! lol *bangs her head on a wall* I need SLEEP!
person SakuraHaruno23
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and very nice please continue
person seph
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sa...sasuke? doko e sasuke T_T SAAAAAAAAAAASUKE I HATE YOU SASUKE WHY AREN"T YOUR THERE TO MOLEST...I er...i mean rotect NARUTO you cruel cruel gay MAN!!!! ARGH!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAH *cries tears overflowing the room*
person DragonessoftheMikosFlame
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Poor Naru-kun having to put up with Sakura all the time. I love the way you've done Gaara and Sasuke (both of which i love) Please update soon!!
person ShinigamiTaishou
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So great again. So, the Uchiha always so famous and captain of Gaara, unexpected. I loved it and the seat, they really want to have their own and personal seat! Quite funny. I'm happy to see that Sasuke is finally in your story. I hope to see you soon, I really love this story, hope there will be a lot of chapters. So, see ya and continue your great job!
person Kirume
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD Although Naruto is supposed to be very fond of Sakura. But whatever, it's still a great story XD. I hope there isn't too much Sakura bashing though, I'm quite fond of her now that she's more mature. I don't care for her too much either when it comes to fanfics though, so yah :P.
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh back again i am to review some more!
great chappie!

were sasuke and gaara having a pissing contest over who got to sit by Naruto?
by the way naruto is a lovely little uke in this story hes soooo kawaii!

all the girls are raving slobbering maniacs
why not just make the walk hunched over with their knuckles dragging on the ground

*sees mental image of a room full of girls hunched over and jumping on desks grooming each other
like monkeys*
*enter sasuke kun*
oh ohh ohh sasuke kun! sasuke kun! ooh ah ah ha!
*monkey girls start jumping and hollering throwing feces every where dry humping one another*

again i state SASUNARU
at this point i think a poll has already been taken if i read the reviews right
person Tamara
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, thanks for the review it made me happy :)
sorry about the Sasu/Naru thing i just can't stand the pairing anymore please forgive me :'(

This was a very funny chapter I think that coversation between Sasuke and Naruto was cute and it made my chuckle alot!
you updated quickly and you didn't disappoint me at all that kool that your writing really well and that's what's making me enjoy your story more.

I vote for Neji/Naru -.-
person Kirume
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ara? The thing that Gaara said, isn't that from Loveless? XD Man I love that series, and I vote SasuxNaru XD. If there is any more time to vote anyway :P
person digi-girl
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
soccer, eh? Well, i'm suprised, i could actually see that. I'm getting really intrested as to where this is going, so i'm looking forward to more chapters. ...and more Neji as well? he's been gone a while after all, hehe.