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for This way to the stars

by godofcontradiction

person Midnight Moon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way its silly now and that everyone is fighting for Naruto's affections. Even if this is a SasukexNaruto story, I would so darn love it if like Gaara tried to make a move on Naruto and Sasuke being hella jealous. Lol. I really like this story! Continue soon!
person SamuraiGirl
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is a good story. Its so close to real life that I can picture it happening. I hope you continue!
person Lynn
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update :D
person Death Of Angels..
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG.. its getting good really fast... you have to right more,.. OKAY... hehehe okay CYA tc...
person tess
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more or you die
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really caught up in your story! Sasuke, Naruto, Neji, and Garaa are just to HOT! I wish you the best of luck and hope you update as soon as possible!

P.S

Could you send me an e-mail when you update your story? Please and thank you!
person Inuchi
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh that's ok it was just a suggestion any ways! lol it kinda looks like there all gonna be fighting over Naruto even tho Sasuke gonna get him in the end...*does little dance for sasunaru* ehehe... *sweatdrop* anywho *nervously munches on the cookie you gave me, then I'm just a baka steals it* NOOOOoo damn it that's my cookie!! XE
person I'm just a baka
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Muhaha i got Inuchi's cookie >D (i went to the kitchen and really got one after she typed that aka me "stealing" teh cookie n_n) lol yes i did really love this chap I love the possessiveness go get him Sasuke!! PROTECT YOUR UKE!!! lol... hey can u throw in some gaaraXlee?? it would be very appreciated! :P muha much of teh luv!! <3 (ya kno my name suits me well after all I'm just a baka!)
person Ashrey
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Chappy 10!!

Poetry~~ remind me about the chapter where sasuke read a poem for a certain blonde X3 my fav chap besides the cooking class XDD

Of course it's ok ^^, sweet neji won't hurt ne? X3 and actually the real neji is kinda sweet XD

Oh yeah, will itachi show up?? another competitor for sasuke XD
person KaiwaiiKoneko
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Koneko:I'm sorry! *bows* I'm sorry that I have been rude and possive over these few days. School is stressing me out. My social studies teacher can be such a pain in the ass and a bitch! So is stressing the hell out of me. I'm sorry if I have been annoying and obnoxious.*smiles sheepishly* I can't believe I'm failing at math and Science! *looks like she is going to pull her hair out* Ugh! *anime tears*
Abunai:You better believe it brat
Koneko:*glares* Anyway back to the real subject. Keep up the good work. I like the part when Sasuke, Neji, and Gaara are fighting over Naruto while Naruto is screaming that he is not a yoyo. It was funny *laughes* Come on update plz with chocolate chip on top? *sad kitty eyes*