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that was such a beautiful story, but i am quite saddened about the ending though.

I found this to be interesting.

OMG.....this was totally kick ass very very awesome..........poor sakura........i really do hope u continue this pretty pretty please.........i just had some questions.......did sakura go up to itachi and say hey i want to have your baby? did he know who she was? i also saw that u put that he had left her money or something was it b/c he thought she was a whore or he knew that she would come out preggers from this encounter..............anywho please follow up on this it was really good keep up the good work................ooooooooo and can i make a request ........could u write a fic of sakura and gaara ......that would really kick ass .....ok ill shut up now :)

Cool... This is cool. So it's Sasuke's baby? But it's not? But it is? ARGH! *pulls on hair frantically*. Oh well... You'll explain it all in due time, I'm sure. Keep up the good work!

Oh my god! They killed Sasuke! those Basterds! I kid... I liked les fic, it kicked arse.

Now THAT was a story that was just begging to be told. Good job, especially with the last part (the birthmark), but I kinda wish you had related how Sakura managed to get Itachi to lower his guard enough to bed her. I mean, no matter how long he stays awake, screwing and climaxing are perfect opportunities for ninjas to assassinate him. And since you say that Sakura's physique (not physicality) was a dead giveaway, he would be on to her. So why accept? I mean, he couldn't possibly have thought that "here is this hot ex-kunoichi who's become destitute and is now a prostitute", right? I'm sure shinobi pays way better than prostitution, unless you're a geisha (who are not prostitutes per se).

So yeah, it would've helped if you had related how Sakura managed to convince Itachi she was a common whore, and bed her rather than any other ho.

Still, that was strangely erotic despite the angst. XD Loved the bit where you mentioned she had been nekkid since she stepped into the room.

it was fantastic...i loved it but one question...did she have sex with Sasuke before he died? and was the baby Itachi's or Sasuke's...i hope it was Itachi and i hope she didn't have sex with Sasuke first but...i guess she did....

SQUEEEE!!
AWSOME
you know i love all your stuff but this is even better thn usual
please say there will be more soon? please?
i cant wait i simply cant wait!