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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a great job on this lemon. It was very original, I always read lemons that say the same stuff over and over, but you used some original language and I really appreciate that in a fic. All in all I have to say an awesome read! 9 out of 10.
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.........i've actually never considered Neji/Shika before...i dont know why.........that was about maybe the hottest thing i've ever read and the end was sweet ^__^
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT AN ABSOLUTELY LOVELY AND SMUTTY FIC YOU WROTE HERE!! I enjoyed it immensely, though am a bit sad to see it end. T__T I would love to see more development in this relationship with Neji and Shikamaru. There's hardly any good fics with them out there. Hope to see more of your stuff! Wonderful job and thank you so much for sharing this with us. :D
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've been wondering what would happen if we got those two together! *MWEOR!*...Very yummy! I thought it was really great!...The lemon was fabulous and I liked the beginning monologue in which he gets caught...though I felt you overused the 'genius' characteristic and had some problems on the grammar, thankfully, it didn't take away from your cute ficlet! Good job and hopefully you crank out more NejiShika fics! The world could definitely use more of them! ^-^
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like Shikamaru's laziness and the connection between clouds and Neji's eyes. I like Shika a the bottom here. I'd like more . . .
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
best lemon I've ever read...And NejiShika is my favourite pairing, so you rock!>o<
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the pairing is really nice. but i don't like the fact shikamaru's the uke. nevertheless, your writing-style is great.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! neji and shikamaru are sooo sexy thank you :):):):):):):):):):):):):)
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some grammatical errors with present and past tenses and with plurals. Keep working and you can become a good writer.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fanfiction, man. Absolutely loved it. ^_^