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for Broken Reflections

by scythehaven

person t.k
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. please please please ! update!
person ladygizarme
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story, it's very interesting and a different spin from any "other dimension" fic i've seen.. i can't wait to read more!! will konoha-sasuke meet tokyo-sasuke? and what's really going on?! lol i'm so impatient, so i hope you write more soon!!
person kenz
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so is thsi like teh story Parrallel(sp?)
continue...
person etman93
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good story one of the best ive read so far please go on =)
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person Kirume
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Although this story has the same concept as the story "Parrellels", it's not exactly the same at all. Since in her story Naruto is in an universe where Yondaime survived, thus creating an alternate reality. It doesn't have the modern concept you added in, so don't worry, noone thinks your like.. copying her or whatever :D. Besides, theres lots of stories where Naruto is brought to an alternate reality, don't know what people are freaking out about. Btw, I love this story :D! I wonder how Naruto is going to react in such a different environment ^^. Continue!

And to the reviewer a few boxes above myself, when in names, grammar construction doesn't really apply. Like how Akatsuki means Red Moon. It's not called Akai no Tsuki is it? I like Midorimori, it makes me think of fairies and cute green forest spirits and what not XD. Although I guess that's not really the feeling you were going for it is ^^;;.
person Anya
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahem... you know me and I won't shut up.
So here you go:
The beginning is very good, romantic actually. A bit fluffy but that's to be expected. Though, I was wondering where real Sasuke is... yeap, a great dilemma of mankind's existence.
And to shut some people up:
'Midorimori' - is grammatically legal just because it's a proper noun. Just so it's in the naming of Aomori prefecture in Japan. When you say "midori no mori", it would mean "forest full of green plants" and I suppose the author just wanted to call it "green forest", so people with any objections back off, please. Hope I wasn't harsh.
Hugs & have a good day!
person Mija
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh I like this fic, its kind of creepy and mysterious, did they jump from one world to the next?? what was the crying noise and how did Sasuke get caught too? I know Naru went to the hut and something happened but how bout Sasuke??? and if Naru is confussed and remembers his Ninja life why doesnt Sasuke??? soo many questions, I need answers, when will you update again??? wow I sound childish, I cant wait for another update, hope its soon, thanks for that great read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Moon_Shadow
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Good job with it!!! Please update soon!! That was to much of a cliffhanger!!
person AtsumiHaruko
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yup, this storyline is definitely like "Parallels". Right now I'm a bit confused about the situation, but I wish you good luck!
Oh, and it shouldn't be "midori mori", but "midori no mori". You can't use a word like "midori" without adding a particle. In Japanese, it's a noun and not an ordinary adjective. See ya!
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD a universe-switch!!! waidago!!!! update!!!