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by DarkSeductress

person YaoiFiendFettish19
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't going to review, but I decided that's just rude...anyway I've already read this. I believe I read it on ff.net. I absolutly loved it then, and I completly love it now! Thank you for writting it so well!
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
See, again, your writing is amazing. I love it. The choice in words. The use of imagery and thoughts. I love it. Black-hair's self-loathing and Pink-hair's disdain and unbreakable hate/love. Blond-hair's torn between them...torn on what he should do--well, not what he should do. He wants to fix them but does he know how? It's a mystery. This is just awesome.
person Jinhito
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was very... thought provoking. I highly enjoyed it! ^_^ Nice ending too; angst is a wonderful writing tool...
person Mija
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww this one was the same as in I could see this fic actually become true, I could see thier pain, thier hurt, and Naru wanting to fix them, Sasu not wanting them to be fixed and Saku hating them both for her own quilt, it was very sad but very good, I liked it alot, made me sniffle, ty for the read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)