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for Come Undone

by naojun

person DewiSri
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When are you updating again?
person Breek
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this promises to be highly fascinating; will you be writing more to and updating soon?
person pance
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the story so far. :)
person Kiwichi
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ Nice plot! I really like it, it's extremely hard to find Kaka/Saku fics these days...(nods) The characters are all in-character, so don't worry about it, I like your style of writing. So much better than mine. (goes off to sob in a dark corner)

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person Funkybilbo
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start to a story, the characters are not OOC and it flows well so far, so you just have to email me when you update it, everytime.
Laters
person krickets
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!
you know you just have to take the time you need...the effort is
usually worth the wait.

i understand fully its usually a month between each one of my updates...
not cool but there you go i wish i could motivate myself to do even
bi-monthly but unfortunatly life gets in the way.

kri-chan
person Leslie
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I understand about them being somewhat OCC but it really isn't to noticable at this point. Kakashi really hasn't had much to say, yet. Naruto is funny. Really want to read the next chapter. Sakura really doesn't seem to be to happy about her assignment.
person Lady Moon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is very interesting, please update soon!!!
person sharingun
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAHH!!! KAKASAKU ACTION! :3 You just made my day, I hope you'd continue.. pelase say you will!
person Takue_onigiri
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the plot. very nicely thought/planned out, also your characters were well written. not much occ i could find in them.

now for kakashi and sakura. nothing to say other then have their releationship develop! ^^