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for Yoru No Koishii

by Khat

person Vox
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'I hate weasels around my foxes.'
XD Sasuke is such a machoman. Hhihihi.
person Vox
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...And again, I just wanted to remind you that I love your work...
person Uchiha Serina
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Keep writing! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
person ShinigamiTaishou
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter again! I love this story. The little fox is so cute. Anyway, hope to see more soon. I wonder how Naruto is dealing with Itachi. keep going your excellent work!
person tsubaki-hana
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why I haven't reviewed this story yet, but it is due time that I did.

First off, your characterization is impeccable. I can honestly believe that the characters would act in the way you portray them, especially Sasuke and Naruto. (But hey, Sasuke is a tough nut to crack!) I am pleased with the way you treat the relationship, and don't make them all cuddle buddy like in many fictions I've seen. I'm glad that you write in such a way that I can see the complexities beyond hot, matress-ruining sex.

The plot has me hooked, and I find myself checking around to see when this is updated really frequently. It's become sort of a routine. XD I can't wait to see Sasuke and Naruto's reunion. And my goodness, I hope Naruto gets over his dreadful back injuries. I actually winced when I read that.

I look forward to the next installment of this fan fiction. It has given me somethign to look forward to.

-tsubaki
person harukaharuka
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're such a sadist against Naruto. Me hearts you though. *gives cookie with whiskers*
person powder07blossom
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAH!!! I LOVE IT!!! I love it when Naruto suffers a bit... I'm a sadist that way... I like where the story is going right now... Please continue as I hate unfinished fics... And PLEASE be fast about it... :D
person Vox
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto... Man, Sasuke is gonna be so pissed when he gets back...
person Gingitsune
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You are so mean to Naruto!!! I really hope that Naruto has not lost the use of some of his hands or something :( I am really caught up in this story....sigh......I wonder what Sasuke's true feelings towards Naruto is......He sees Naruto as someone that can help him to kill Itachi but does he truly like or love Naruto. I also wonder about Itachi's views towards Naruto....it would be interesting if it becomes a love triangle. More?
person vashta
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry, I like this fic, but your Sasuke is a jerk! How can he say he love's Naru and do this to him, I get more upset every chap! Please tell me he is going to have a huge revelation and figure out that Naru is more important than revenge?! And Naru is just too starved for love, I mean he seriously needs to thump Sasu upside the head and assert himself here. When this is over Naruto needs to make Sasuke grovel and jump thru flaming rings of death to make it up to him, a nice soul bearing priority change would be very welcome. Well, I am hooked regardless, more please!