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by MLL

person Emmy
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! This is one of the best one-shots i've read in a while, beautifully written, and very fun to read. Not only was it funny, but also sad, and fluffy, and steamy..it had a little bit of everything! Sasuke seemed so bad at first, but the poor guy was just afraid of losing Naruto. You dealt with their feelings very well, eventhough poor Neji was kinda pushed to the side, lol. But of course, it was about Sasuke and Naruto, so I guess it was to be expected. They make such a cute couple, but still...poor Neji! I really loved that part, "are you Uchiha Sasuke? then "...yes..." then "good" and WHAM! Ice prince goes down! Ok, getting kinda carried away, but just wanted you to know how perfectly written that part was. Well, again, wonderful job here, and I hope to read more of your stuff in the future! Later!
person Reyn
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...I liked it ^_^
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* that was great. you always make exceptional one shots. there was a couple of grammatical errors but besides that this was really good. keep up the great work.
person lock
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OW! you mean! hehe i really dont expect that ending i really thought that naruto is the one died! you really a good.. no you're great writer! i'll wait for your next story.
i reviewed from your past stories, because i think its deserving to be appreciated! til next time!
person lock
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEHE! i'm back sorry for my mistake on my first review on this fic, its for aching (a fic of yours too!).. i'll wait for your next story and i'll will be the one of your no.1 fan and reviewer! *thumbs-up*
person MedicNinM
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww... TT_TT *sniffles* i thought it was cute! and heartwarming... hee.. yeah.... i enjoyed it! ^_^
person Mochi~
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. The last part of the story almost made me cry.
You write really beautiful, though some things seemed a bit rushed. Like Naruto and Neji's friendship for example.
person Sukara
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's nice...even though i skipped over the parts of Sasuke molesting Naruto and the fight with Orochimaru, it was pretty okay. xD
person ShinigamiTaishou
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this one-shot. It was really awesome. The end was so touching. There were so many emotions in your story, that was so sweet and cute. I really liked the end, so perfect. I really don't find appropriate word to describe perfectly how I found your story because it was so great! I liked it, I wouldn't make any changes if I were you, but it's your story, so do what you want with it, but it's splendid! I really like your writing style, so I'll check your other work gladly! See ya! (Beautiful work again!)