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by KrickItat

person Chelsey
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I win! *does happy dance* I wanted Kakashi to be in that room (and you wrote the pervert so well) Thanks. Anywho on to my review, I found no mistakes whatsoever so nothing to complain about there. And you do write Sasuke well, and he is a dick, we all know it and we all love it. Pictureing Sasuke with big eyes and kissable wet lips makes me want to hurl actually. I like the smokey kiss it fits his bastardness quite well. Sai wiping himself with Sakurs's shirt made me crack-up laughing. And you're right he does like her but he's still an ass, again we all know and love it. Plus the steaminess of the smut had me crossing my eyes and I think drooling a little, I need to go find my boyfriend. You are truely to god(dess?) of writing this sweet pair. And I wish my tattoo moved! I do love that you made the dragon have a persona, it gives it more character and a bit of cuteness. It's like all tattooes they have their own stories and through that their own personalities.
I'm in the middle of two projects for friends at the moment but I would be happy to create some fan art for you! Just email any specifics you have or want to me, and I'll light that roaring fire under my ass and get it started for you. And don't feel bad none of my fictions except one have ever had any fanart. The one was a oneshot RedSliver and I did for the fanart winner.
To recap, I love you, Sasuke's a dick (which he really is), you rock, I do fanart just email me, you're a deity of some gender (whichever you really are),and please for the love of Jesus fucking Buddah in a loveshack update as soon as humanly possible (honestly sitting in panties sucking a loli AND caressing the keyboard has got to be slowing down the creative process!)

As Always,
Chelsey AKA: HisBeautiful
person Inuzuka
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unique pairing, and an interesting plot, still. Plus...the awesome smut doesn't hurt at all. ^_^;; You're convincing me this is one of those pairings that just *should* happen. I'm definitely enjoying this story!
person akasha
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kakashi, huh? that came out of left field. but i'm glad that sai and sakura finally got it on! now... all we need is for sasuke to find out so that he can get supremely jealous and self-righteous and uppity all because he's the world's biggest dick and thinks that sakura is his property since she was obsessed with him for so long! *gasping for breath* really, i just want his perky little nose rubbed in the fact that sakura didn't choose him, and thus makes him a LOSER!! muhahaha!! staying tuned for the next installment... please update soon!
person tennyoakana
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAh you so need to up date! I think i'm in love with your story!
person Sanguine
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! WHy did you end it there????

I bet it's Sai. Hahahaha. Damn, what would Sasuke do if he saw Sakura's tatoo??? Hmmmm... XD

Update soon!
person Bloodywolf
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, MORE!

*breaks a glass bottle*

More :-p

Brilliant story, got the bookmared sinds chappy 3, and keep cecking it out now and then. I really can't wait for the nexst.
person Menna
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! If you do, do you mind e-mailing me? silver_crystalyn_tears@yahoo.com

This is great!!! I hope you can update soon.
person The Black Shirt
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intense, incredible and inspiring... hoochie genius! I like this story, man! I've been interested in S&M and BDSM for some time, and I've never seen it put into such a good plot... something so beautiful and noble as art...
I
t's like a perfect fit in a jigsaw puzzle, you know?

Say... you type naked??!! Uhh... do you live alone or something? 'Cause I'm sure even my wife would flip out if she found me naked typing ANYTHING in my computer, even if it's a resume for a job for christ's sake! Hahaha!! ... oh boy.

Anyway, I'm a fan right now of you.
God bless ya soul,
The Black Shirt
person Chelsey
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And again....waiting is hard. Hope the writing is going well. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update as soon as you can.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person 3048
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sai x sakura!