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Woooooooooooooooooooooooo!

WHere is this going?? why does Naruto not want to train and get stronger?? Has he given up in your story?? It is still well written. I just want to know. Keep up the good work.

XD CX cool fic! update!!!

its a nice story and a nice concept

there are quite a few typos
and also its a bit ooc
Naruto drives himself to train
he isnt the kind of guy who slacks off during training
he challenges himself to work harder then everyone
and often stays after every one else long into the night

examples: Tree climbing
he stayed the whole night even after sasuke left and wound up falling asleep in the forest

rasengan
he drove himself so hard the he wasnt even able to use his hands to hold chop sticks
working for hours punching spirals into trees until he passed out

i dont know it is just hard to read that part where you keep talking about him slacking off cause he dosnt

Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know what's going on!!!!!!!!!!! So please update!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster

Interesting, I like how you began this story. It is preety well written. There are a few errors that look like they are just a result of fatigue, but over all this is good.