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for Malicious (Ch. 9 up!)

by Mitamay

schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO I need more holy Sh*T that is so hot. KIba/Kankurou OMFG love it Nauto/Gaara/Sasuke Yummy
person llyoung
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I'm glad that you were able to come back to this story and write another chapter.
person oohshiny
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. itachis one sick bastard in this fic. email me when you update it XD
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:coughswoon: Nice. A very entertaining and suspenseful read. Interesting to see this all move along. Itachi's a bit crazy, isn't he? Poor Sasuke. I wish I could say more, but I really don't know what to. All in all, this is a good story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person blisblop
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neat.God I wish you would update,the tension is killing me!
person tlad
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What no more? U tempt me then u do this? I want more chapters! MORE!
person Sir Magus
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! great story so far hope u continue it pls update soon!!
person wendyghost
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i remeber this story and i kept looking for it but i couldn't remeber the name anyways good story!
person mimi-chan
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn this story is hot. i can't wait for gaara to show up. great story.
person blisblop
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yowza!You improved during the writing of this,it's easy to notice, I came in so late on this.Hey!Don't hurt Anko,she my fav,well besides the Uchiha Bros,,well Neji is a fox(more neji/Sasuke peeps,please!)and ,well ,yea ,how can one resist Shino and last and longest...Orochimaru,the GREAT SNAKE.So yeah,have him turn Anko or something More snakes!More snakes!(I personally only have two,sniff).I liked so many aspects of this...Sasuke teasing Kakashi...Sakura having a personality(not to say she doesn't have one in the new manga arc...and that new guy,groan...the Master knows us well,does he not),sex fiend extrordinaire,himself Itachi,I loved his Anko fight,the dialogue in this is a trip!Vera hip.You balence everyone out,love Kiba's two man alarm clock...how does Itachi avoid all those Hyugas?(I spelt that wrong,I think).Yup,this rocks.I feel bad about that kid who got it in chap 1.Very sad...ummm....using no lube hurts the person shoving it in too....no one ever seems to consider this...Itachi would be raw meat by now.ITs a fic ,I know....Love it.