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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Everything is way OOC in here and this story is creeping me out....I don't think they had leather sex swings >.>
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the suspense is killing me! Usually I like Itachi but he's being terrible in this one
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! I love this! You better not be the type of author that starts a really good story and then decides to drop it right in the middle. Update!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is hot... o_o; I guess that's a wrong thing to say about a murder/rape scene for the opening chapter, but I'm a sick fuck anyways, so it's hot.
Chapter one was... interesting. Busted my ass laughing, after I got over the disappointment of the lack of a blowjob. It's great so far, I'm surprised there's not mroe reviews. keep up the good work!
Chapter one was... interesting. Busted my ass laughing, after I got over the disappointment of the lack of a blowjob. It's great so far, I'm surprised there's not mroe reviews. keep up the good work!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh, I think I see where this is going. Red eyes? Please don't make it be Sasuke, please don't make it be Sasuke... *shows puppy dog eyes*
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THat was awesome! I cracked up when they caught Naruto and Sasuke in the shower and at the end at what Naruto said. This story seems very interesting. I like it, I read your first chapter but didn't review, sorry about that. Anyway can't wait until your next update.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO That bathtub scene wuz hilarious!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it could be interesting when we get to see the main characters. I wouldn't normally suggest starting a fanfic off with none of the main characters, but your writing might be good enough to pull it off. I look forward to seeing where you're going to take this.