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by SeveredWings

schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay. That was hot!!
person tovah
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot! Totally f'n Hot!
person S
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=D

I'd suggest that you didn't rush things so much. And try to keep the characters more real
person Taosu
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your muse. <3
person Maniac
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahah. Aah, I LOVE NejiSasu/SasuNeji paring, too. :D
Great story, keep writing!
person Rei
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its very amusing to say the least.
person Nekochan134
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jiraya. You already mentioned him and a bet. :-p Also......HURRY UP ON UPDATES PLEASE. I would LVOE to see if Neiji gets to see his dream come to life. *drool*
person Constancia Abismo
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so tempted to bow before your amazing lemon skillz of awesomeness! You MUST do more SasuNeji lemon! Maybe have Neji a tad dominant...? Ah, ignore me. I'm a tad dazed after that amazing lemon scene. You're a great writer. I can't wait to see that fic...
person Ankhazu
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic! abso-fuckin-lutely awesome! i love sasuneji fics, there are nowhere near enough of them. you rock!
person mika
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
part of a fic you say? can't wait to read it! good job!