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Interesting and hot story^^

Gahhhh this fic was wonderful! You did an amazing job with keeping everyone in character and the sexual tension was brilliant. It was quite torturous waiting to see what genjutsu would be thought of next after each time... and I really loved the conclusion (though seeing the "story for another day" of the three of them being together would be nice... then again that's a story that's been written many times n.n). Wonderful job!

HEY I WANT TO SEE THE ACTION XD

i wanna see them playing and sexing together :hehee

I'm a little confused. Except for Naruto's observations it doesn't seem like Sasuke's expressed any interest in Sakura sexually (and Naruto isn't the most reliable source anyway). And at the end, it seemed like a kiss on the cheek is more platonic than romantic, and the kiss was only exchanged between Sakura and Sasuke, and Sakura and Naruto. If they ARE in a romantic relationship (and the pairing at the intro is the main foundation for this assumption), is it strictly heterosexual? Besides Naruto SAYing he wouldn't be upset if Sasuke had the hots for him and he might try it once to see, there's not indication that Naruto is interested in Sasuke (and trying it once doesn't mean anything relationship-wise). So is the relationship strictly NaruSakaSasu, or is it mixed up? I mean, I'm not saying you have to do anything graphic, but I think the vague note you left on (even with the epilogue) doesn't do justice to the story. It was really well written and I like how it stayed more-or-less in character despite the situation, but it's just very... anti-climatic. I had assumed Sasuke was into Naruto, so the strictly hetero threesome seems off, but maybe they're just have flirty friendship with openly stated sexual tension (and that had caused some gossip) like the ending suggests. It just seemed that you were going a different direction for a while there.

Heh heh, that was a great story. I like the ending though. Does that mean that there is another story to come? Anyway I like how you still maintained the integrity of the way team seven interacts. Nice work.

Really good. I'm looking forward to the sequel.
Rox

great story really...so um...is there gonna be any hot lemony action...just wondering...hoping...begging...?

That was great!! I can't wait for you to put out the sequel!!!

are you going to write another story?