AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Sweetest Victory

by mischiefmaker

person Chelsey
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! I have to say that I nearly died laughing! I do hope Sakura's revenge is sweet. Revenge is, after all, a dish best served cold. Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person ronsmyhero
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!! I love the whole banter between the three and poor poor Kakashi for having to put up with them... LOL please continue and know that I will be not so patiently waiting for your next chappy! LOL
person Inari
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, those little devils. That *was* pretty mean. XD Poor Sakura. I hope she gets them good for that. >_>

Anyhoo, I'm loving the story. <3 Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Sasha
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
person blisblop
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yippee!Good one!
person ShivaAeon
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I nearly had an asthma attack when I read the old lady scene! I was gasping so much my dog freaked out and came over to see if I was ok. You better continue this, because this is some stuff. Are you gonna have Sakura put an illusion over Sasuke and Naruto to make them think THEY did something steamy together?(wiggles eyebrows suggestively) Ah, one can only image the hell that will ensue in the next chapter.
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The pairings listed are going to be separate scenes, not all three at once.

Although, I will admit that I have the entire story mapped out EXCEPT the very end and have been toying with the idea of having it be ultimately NaruSakuSasu. I haven't really decided though. It's probably going to depend mainly on how that last genjutsu turns out once I write it (I have this horrible tendency for things to go in the complete opposite direction from what I intended X_x)

Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments. I can't seem to get rid of this cheshire cat grin! ^__^
person Moo-chan
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mou, I just love this story! It's frightfully delicious! And your characterizations are just fabulous! Not to mention wonderful grammar and spelling!

And small question: By pairings (Saku/Naru, Saku/Sasu, Naru/Sasu) does this imply a threesome or are they strictly separate? Heh, just wondering! ^^

Hope you update soon! I'm hooked on this pillow-biting tale! :3

+Moo-chan
person Lady Moon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very hilarious story!!!
And it soooo screams threesome later on in the story, (which would be a perfect fit for this story), well any way please update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You had me cracking up the whole way through! I'll definetly be keeping track of this one! Damn! That was pretty much hilarious. :D