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for The Sweetest Victory

by mischiefmaker

person Anon
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for finally updating! come again soon!
person jennjennr
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
tehe that was great, the poor boys, they may be scared for life. i'm not really into guy on guy but i'm willing to read it in your story, because you write so well. i actully want to see how you write it. i love the comidic aspect of this its great, i had the hardest time not laughing my ass off and waking my roommate when i read the last scene. please continue soon.
person hopelessdreamer
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue super soon, I crave more!
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLLLLEAASSSSE continue soon, I love this fic it's super funny!
person Feion Phylar
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh maaaan...this story is OFF THE HOOK! ^O^ Hilarious and welll written I am loving it!

I'm really curious to see just how she is going to get Sasuke and Naruto back. I'm happy that she's not just taking it out on Naruto too because it really would have been unfair. This story is a HELL A LOT of fun to read and I am hooked. It been a while since I've stumbled on something original like this really on the mark.

Their personalities are so there and I can really see something like that happening. Please continue, trust me you so got a HIT FANFIC on your hands.


Feion Phylar
person DeathPirate
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good, the dialogue and situations are really believable for the characters and I'm glad that you HAVEN'T mentioned a timeframe so it's more like a sidestory.
It's quite cute so far really, more risque stuff! Use the Sasuke power! And for gods sake keep Kakashi clueless, he's better off that way.
person aoshi4misao
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weee, I want to know what Sakura does to get them back. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, and good job on this one.
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man so fun! more!
person Sandra
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didnt know if i would like this story, but after reading a few paragraphs....i freakin love it! Continue, you have a great story line.
person Ly
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! liked it, for now! =D
can't wait for narusasu, he he he.