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This story is just so funny! :-) I laughed all the time. What I like particularly: That they act their age - sometimes they even behave as if they were a bit younger than they are. (At the moment I am a bit fed up with Sasunaru or Narusasu fanfics where they are both virgins and go in one night from admitting to themselves and to each other that they might be interested in more than a friendship to full-grown anal sex, which happens to be a perfect heavenly experience.)

So I like the rather grotesque sexual jokes they play to each other - just the thing that boys and girls do when they have begun to be interested in each other, but still don't know how to express this interest. And your story is really funny and full of ideas! :-)

Some minor quirks: Sasuke is a bit OoC. Well, of course, noone knows how he will be when he has finally defeated Itachi and returned to Konoha. Maybe he will be a bit more relaxed then than he is at the moment. But particularly in the first and second chapter I found some lines where I could not tell whether it was Sasuke or Naruto speaking.

In later chapters it gets better.

But the reason why I write: I hope that you are going to continue the story. :-)

I think I dislike you. DX It hurts me inside that you left it there. Actually, I'm just impatient. But whatever. I hope for the next chapter soon, I want to see how they work it out!

Oh my God, I love this fic. Everything about it is absolutely fantastic: the dialogue, the prose, the plot... the not-quite-smut (you're such a tease!). I can't wait to read more! :::fans self::: This is flawless.

awww *____* why it took you so long to update? anyways, nice chapter,most of all you can't leave it there! I HAVE to know the sequel, the fic 's got really interesting now! things are finally clearing out -after all these jokes for the bet there's no coming back- and I wonder how sasuke will react and what exactly they are going to tell him...(i bet he'll sulk for a looong time unless they do smthin) and...Yay! a date! even if not in the best mood at first XD ...but i liked their dialogues and when Naruto got serious, telling her that he meant it when he said he wanted her. Uhm...Uhm...and when he thought about having two of his clones kicking his ass when he got home XDDD lol! poor him, trying to be logical for once!

That was really good. I can't wait to read on.
Rox

Oh my god... threesome next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! EEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story is so fucking great! =^^= I can't wait. Update! Update! Update! <3 <3 <3

hehehe.

OMG an update!!!

i can't wait for the next chapter!!

I cannot believe you updated this fic. I seriously don't know how to thank you enough *____* this is probably my favorite threesome fic of all time and here I thought there was no hope of ever getting past that nail-chew-to-the-root awkward moment. Very interesting how you handled Sasuke's response. It reminded me of the immature, angry, arrogant punk in K.M.'s canon. Also, I adore your Naruto's personality. You write him so hunk-o'-manly yet adhere to the general sweetness, obnoxiousness, and charm of his canon character. This is admirable considering so many fic writers--albeit talented--write him either as a girl with aberrant endowments or qualify his maniless as due to 'beast' inside, and so he often borders on boorishness. I find when reading sasunaru/narusasu fics that whenever a writer attempts to achieve what you've done, Naruto becomes an OC whose whisker marks and love for ramen are the only way of identifying him. So yeah... claps all over you.

I love the sniffing the armpits bit--classic!

Thank you for sharing this story, and very very thank you for updating it! Even if I can't read it for another forever and so, I'm squealing happy today. ^_^

Oh yay! You updated! I was sooooo happy when i saw this. I screamed my head off. I really can't wait for hte next chapter so you can't take to long in updating it!

ITS ABOUT DAMN TIME!!! OMG, I COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT THIS AND ITS ONE OF MY FAVORITES!!! Glad you finally decided to update, now if you could please make this a continuous thing Id be forever grateful. Keep up the good work and for the love of all things Yaoi PLEASE update soon.