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for The Sweetest Victory

by mischiefmaker

schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well done and well writen,
Would have liked to see it completed but oh well
person anonymous
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when is this story gonna be updated? i want to read more!
person Tsukamei
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting and I can't wait for it to update!
person A passerby
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My my... this is great. I don't think I've ever read a better Naruto fanfic. It's surprisingly in character, hilarious, and a very 'smooth' read.

I hope you continue soon :]
person rachael
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, OMG, OMG. Mischief maker, you have made beautiful mischief and I am desperate to see what you are going to do!! That chapter was really intense. I love your characterization of Naruto as crude and brassy--it fits him so well. Gah. For the most part my brain is mush I liked that last so much. Please update!
person Tsuki no Yuri
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy fucking titty shit. -please excuse the profanity- O_O My eyes hurt from all the bugging out they did at the last chapter --and all the other chapters, for that matter.
In fact, I read this story YESTERDAY, but I was so wigging-out/broken-brained/spazzing in_a_super-awsome_good_way, that I couldn't even bring myself to review until I calmed down.
^^;;;
Can you tell I enjoyed the story? ;P

omg! Update this! It's just TOO awsome not to!! XD (And, also: That is THE single most evil cliffhanger I have ever read! ;_; You devil you!)
person kat
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! PLZ UPDATE!!!!!!!
person preston
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok ok i see what your doing here and its preety good so far. funny not helirious but too many people try to hard and ruin the whole thing, this is good they should have done somthing like this in the show before the had sauske run away all in all a preety good first chapter
person preston
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
U R sick.... chp.5 ya that was horrible .... good job on the revenge thing to bad for her that it badfired but rally i don't really much care for the whole saskues a fag thing i much perfer the hey naruto lets gangbang sakura thing.
person Yuffie
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear. Freaking. God. How I ADORED this fiction! I'm so sad it's incomplete. Complete it, kay? XDD I seriously LOVE it. LOVE. LOVE. LOVE!