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for The Sweetest Victory

by mischiefmaker

person Polo
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! I love this story, continue soon!
person meg
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just read the last chap. and i have to say your story really kept my attention. a lot of stories i just skim to get to the good, the funny or the deliously baddddd. you were very entertaining all the way threw. please keep writting. (sorry for the bad spelling)
Meg
person me
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sakura is a major bitch in this story. No offence but i dont like how you protrayed her. I feel like beating the shit out of her
person me
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is getting crazy..please dont make this a narusasu..ill be pretty sad but do whatever yu want..still gonna be good
person read-n-review
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh how sweet deceit can be..
I love it like no other.
Write the next chapter soon my dear so that we may find out what Sasuke and Naruto plan to do with Sakura, and what dare I say is Sakura thinking now??
Pain I would imagine..

O! Woe Is The Life Of Poor Sakura-chan,
Yours Truly,
read-n-review v.
((it's what you do))
person James
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg awsome story! The idea of using genjutsu to play tricks on each other is really great! I absolutely love the plot line!!! >w< please update soon! ^^
person Feion Phylar
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOoOoOoOo I've been waiting for ever for this! Yes an Update! Ilove this story! Yaaaay! ^_^ So Sakura got them back good and it looks like Sasuke was the sucker this time around for sure. He must really like Naruto alot to have been fooled by Sakura that easily. Naruto caught on.

^__^ Well at least Sasuke got what was coming to him. He used her feelings of him to hurt her and she used his feelings for Naruto to hurt him. I bet he's really pissed but most of all Sasuke feels humiliated. His biggest secrets are out! What is he going to do!?! *Giggles* Will team 7 ever be the same?

Please continue!!
person Hellagoddess
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...uh...wow

You have to update this, and soon! I love the idea behind this story...i mean, come on...in the world of Nauto you have such wonderful thoings as genjutsu so why not take the time to play around with it!! I'm surprised there aren't more fictions that deal with it...there's so many little things that could come of it...BUT anyways...before i get a ramble on...

This fiction is great! I really like your writing style, the story flows nicely and EVERYONE is nicely in character! I absolutely LOVED the...well...everything...i was going to say the last chapter...but then i remembered just how amusing the Sakura/Kakashi wake-up scene was and how intimate and...just...*insert appropiate adjective here* the scene with Sasuke and Sakura was...

Some of this made me laugh SO hard...and that's a hard thing to do...i'm kinda like Sasuke when it comes to laughing...i'll smile if somethings really funny but it takes me a bit to laugh....so that's definitely a compliment!

Please update soon...I'm really interested to see how this goes... (in all honesty i'm hanging out for the yaoi...being such a NaruSasu fangirl...*sigh* when will it ever end...)

Keep up the awesome work! Ganbatte yo!
person Love_Less_lover
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg, awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Sakura needed her revenge!
person Kit
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing! i really can't wait for more. things are really getting ugly...oh! i really want to find out what they are going to do next!