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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa dis ish good plz do mwrite more luv u style!!! X3
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooo chao 2 lov it muhahaha seme iruka?? O_o dat's new is naruto gonna be uke plz do i love naruto as the uke....but it ur story so u deside!! naya with love, I'm just a baka
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that last part was cuuute!! I love Kakashi uke! XD
Anyways, great story so far! I love it! Silly Naruto and poor poor Iruka, having to answer all those questions. Lol.
Update soon, okay?
Anyways, great story so far! I love it! Silly Naruto and poor poor Iruka, having to answer all those questions. Lol.
Update soon, okay?
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe good chapters wonder what going to happen next :D
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written!!! Just very well done. I like how you set up your stories. The sparing scenes very well thought out and written. Great job.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool. I just want a liitle more character interaction, ummm... character interplay, if you will. This is still very fun to read and wonderfully done.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ME LIKEY. Its really good...I did notice that we are drawing a lot of attention to Naruto's six packs (and all over really), drool*
Can't wait to see where this is going. And I think you are doing a good job in portraying the characters. Update soon!
Plus* I really love the relationship between Iruka and Naruto, bring on more of the mentoring (wink wink* - not that kinda wink, get your mind out of the gutter - well mine dipped in and jumped straight out...)
- yks
Can't wait to see where this is going. And I think you are doing a good job in portraying the characters. Update soon!
Plus* I really love the relationship between Iruka and Naruto, bring on more of the mentoring (wink wink* - not that kinda wink, get your mind out of the gutter - well mine dipped in and jumped straight out...)
- yks
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi, this is an amazing story. I really love it! It's really well written and the descriptions of place and fight are really great. I will surely wait for your next update, because I completely enter in this story, so please keep going your excellent work, please! So continue to write! Ja!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hay your going to write more RIGHT?!?!?!?! ^^ Please do and soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-The Update Monster
-The Update Monster