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for Everyone's Got Secrets

by Erisabesu

schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dang, I wasn't sure how that would end. Was a total surprise!
person Rachelle Ryan
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and twisted. I was really glad you got Naruto to listen, and in a realistic mesh with his personality. Now you just have to fix the other lovers and bash little princess bitch.
person Jessy
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!I love your fic, hope you update it soon, it's killing me, I really want to know what happens next...
So, pleeeeease update!Thanks for the great fic again!
person Jessy
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!Just wanted to say that I am looking foward for a new chapter of this story.It is a really good one, and every time I check the site I look for it.You are a good writer...The last chapter left us all holding our breahs...Please uptade so we don't die of lack of air!Thanks!
person morixharuhi4eva
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nani?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT. THE. HELL?! What is Sasuke doing?! How could he betray Naruto like this?! I hope Naruto kicks his ass! Right now! And what the heck is in that jar?
person inumoon3
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naru-chan! Sasuke's got some explaining to do! And how is it that Iruka's the seme? If anything Kakashi would be seme since he's stronger and smarter...even if they alternate I still think that Iruka would be the uke...but anyway update soon!!!!!!
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you have to update this right away! i don't think i'll be able to wait too long. this is so good! i can't wait to see what it is that sasuke figured out. and how he'll calm naruto down. that will probably be quite the task.
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh! I don't understand what is Sasuke doing?! Poor naru-chan I feel just as confused as him.

Well great chapter.

=)
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job with the story. I love that you dressed him up as his father and freaked out Kakashi! I can't wait to read about their first night of going all the way... ^-^ I just hope Naruto can handle being bottom! Or will he get hurt during the Hunt and Sasuke will come to the rescue or find out afterwards! Or will Naruto win! We won't find out until next time!! Keep up the good work!

~Akira~