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I just had to say that I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue writing 'cos you've got great instincts!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was great!!! Thank you! Thank you!!! Ahhhh, more please!
Slave

GUH. SHIBARI.
I love shibari. *_* You win forever and evers.

Whoo! That was the best chapter yet.

kami i love this fic! But it's the weirdest thing i feel like i have read it before and that i know what's gonna happen in the chapter after this one.... maybe i haven't been reading the author's notes? mhaa oh well keep going!!!!

So hot and sexy! Loved it ^^

erisabesu, in regards to archiving your work/receiving an author account... i sent you an invitation a while back after getting your email saying you were interested, but never heard from you after that and the invite has not been used x__x;; anyway, i deleted the invitation today, but registration is open if you're still interest in archiving your stuff on ochiba. http://www.ochiba.net/writing/list/1/cat/3 is the Naruto section. i hope you haven't changed your mind, but if you have... no worries!

in regards to everyone's got secrets: i felt really bad for Sasuke at the start of this fic, it was actually hard to read him because I hated the way Naruto ran from him; it's nice to see him now getting his just desserts... or bedtime snacks ^_^;;

This is one of my favorite chapters from this story. So many beautiful details I felt like I was at the festival. The love scene; well beginning love scene, between Sasuke and Naruto is one of the best I've read. So full of passion and feelings. I so love your writing. Keep up the great work, can't wait for more, take care.

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com

Oh I think I found something you added . . . this part about what is between Naruto and Shizune makes a little more sense now. So at some point things between them changed . . . will you at some point in this story add to that and explain what happened between them? When you posted the story last time you eluded to that she and even the other ninjas had issues as well, is this the case again? And will you add a part to explain what is going on with her to make her this way? Loved the interaction between Tsunade and Naruto, you present them so well. Question . . .since you have rewritten this story are you going to add elements for the newer manga episodes into it as well? I loved reading Iruka and Kakashi's argument. Not that it's ever fun to fight with someone you care about but those two have such powerful personalities that it's just great to see them interact and holding themselves back while still being themselves and pushing their points. Just the fact that after they made an agreement Kakashi left so the extent of his love for this man. I know you said that you changed somethings about the Uchiha massacre and such, I can't wait to see more on that. In the chapter it says that only Kakashi and Sasuke probably knew the real reason Itachi was out of the village . . .I hope to see more about that again. Loved Kakashi's reaction to Sasuke; so Itachi had been after Kakashi huh? More on that please! *begs nicely on knees* Lol, loved the sake in the tea cup. Be careful what you say Kakashi; the biggest surprise of the night, hee, hee. Lol, the part where Iruka was putting eyeliner on Naruto sounded like something that happens at my house every time my sister brings her daughter over for me to fix her hair for something! Lol, you know what they say beauty doesn't come cheap or painless! I was so rolling by the end of the chapter; poor Kakashi really got put over a barrel in this one. Hmm, payback for setting it all up? Guys going to be drunk by the time he finally gets towards the festival. That was one hell of a shock, I'm sure. Great chapter, loved it as always. Take care.

Please please please update Everyone's got secrets...I'm dying to read more. *Gasp* Will Sasuke win Naruto at First night... will kakashi really molest iruka in front of their two students... what will happen to poor Naru-chan when everyone sees him looking so much like his father...and in his old clothes no less... eek I must know...so please..I'm begging...update soon