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by Erisabesu

person Rachelle Ryan
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love it. Seriously, totally absoluted mind fucked here. Hope he's not going to be the only one shocked in the future. I imagine Iruka's not going to let that go, using a dispelling jutsu sheesh overboard.

And you made the boys so beautiful.

I can't wait for more. =)
person littleolmee
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's all set for the meeting huh? Kakashi is so sneaky. Especially loved the last part where Iruka thinks about a certain special Jounin that wasn't getting any that night, probably not anyway. Do you plan on presenting Shizune as disliking Naruto again? Can't wait for ch 6. Keep up the good work.
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke and Naruto are so cute! And Kakashi is sooo evil. Oh well, he'll get what's coming to him. I so excited, we're getting to where you left off last time. I can't wait fro the next chapter!
person Vega
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been looking for a well paced, well written Naru/Sasu story and this one has fit the bill perfectly. And the Iru/Kaka thrown in is an added bonus. I like the length and the obvious thought you have put into your work and I am looking forward to the next update.
person qwerty
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw. Cute scene. If Itachi didn't kill everyone in the clan, what is his story? Why does he and Sasuke have a tense relationship? What happened to the rest of the Clan? Where is Itachi now? I hope you clarify everything soon (perhaps in the next chapter, that would be nice). Cool Sharingan mind jutsu.
update!
person jbjewel
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so glad to see you back. can't wait. I love this story and can't wait to see what happens.
person leanne
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi and Iruka are incredibly sexy and fun to read in this story. Sasuke and Naruto are sweetly sexy and angsty, definitly a good to read. I hope you will update again soon.
person cynaga
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this story way back when on FF.com (or net - whatever) and I am happy to see it being reworked here. I always saw it as more of a KakaIru story (a great one). Although at the end when you get into the hunt, for me that seemed like almost a seperate story. Anyway I am happy to be rereading it here - thanks! :D
person Rachelle Ryan
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful story. I think your characterization of everybody is dead on. I really love it. Its sexy and loving and angsty. Naruto getting a good punch in was sweet too.
person Telpei
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, too cute!! :) I really have to agree with you, and wonder why everyone tries to see behind Kakashi's mask when they could be trying to get inside his pants instead ;) And he's so romantic!! *fangirl swoon* Iruka is one lucky guy.

On the other hand, Sasuke and Naruto really need to talk to each other! I can't wait to see how they handle their little situation. I really like how you've written this story, with Naruto going to Iruka, Iruka (the loving, worried mother) talking to Kakashi, and Kakashi going to talk to Sasuke. :) This is very well written, and you've got me sitting on the edge of my seat to see what happens next! Please update soon!

ps-the little scene with Konohamaru and Hanabi was sooo cute!!! ^_^