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by Erisabesu

schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go Naruto go Naruto go! The cosmos have answered my prayers!! An update!! Thank you so much!!!
person leanne
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is such a cool story I really love it and the way you are building the story is great and I love Iruka and Kakashi in this story they are hot together too. The orochimaru gap in the story, bypassing that whole experiance is interesting but totally allows for the setting of the story and the commencing of the romance, I love the fact you had Naruto punch Sasuke and run a way I think that is a totally naturall reaction from him, even if he really likes the person and was excited by him and what was being done. I think he would react the same way if he had found himself kissing or being kissed by Sakura only without the punching, he would have ran for the hills in confusion and excitement of finally attaining what he wanted. ( I just brought of Sakura only because she's a past crush and not that I'm a fan of Sakura/Naruto, because I'm not. It's just that in the original story he likes her so darned much, but I really think he'd outgrown that fatuation especially when he focusses on beating Sasuke and or bringing Sasuke back home from Orochimaru...) Uhh off topic there anyway, just love what you have written so far and hope to see more chapters soon.
person littleolmee
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee, hee you got to love Kakashi and Iruka interactions. I really love how you present Kakashi in this story, you really caught his character and little quirks well. I especially like the addition of his thoughts while he is doing some of these things. Your imagination with another use for the Sharingan is wonderful. Kakashi and Sasuke exchanging experiences is one of my favorite parts of this chapter. I think my top fav for this chapter was Kakashi and his sleuthing while finding Sasuke and getting what was going on out of him. You just did such a wonderful job on that part. And of course your humor was very evident in the chapter as well which makes it all that much better. You reposting this story after tweaking it was a fantastic idea; this way you can reintroduce everyone to the story. Keep up the great work, and take care dear.

littleolmee

littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I missed reading this fic SO much. I didn't even realize I had already read it until I got to the part about Naruto's seal and then WONDERFUL memories came floating back. If you're updating it with new chapters, you will, undoubtedly, make my entire week! XD
person Amber
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This...is too awesome for words. Now I see why there were so many reveiws, and for only three chapters! ^.~
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see you reposting this. I loved it when it was first posted and I was so upset when you stopped updating (especially because I couldn't remember the title). Even having read the first chapters before I'm dying for more!
person I4eather
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories ever!! I'm so glad you're re-releasing it, and I'm so excited to read the updates! Welcome back, this is really a great day for aff.net!! =DDDDD p.s. the color of freshly squashed chili peppers.... that rocked my world.
person Sayuri
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I first read this a LONG time ago and I loved it then and I still love it. I can't wait for you to continue it. They're so cute together that they definitely have to make it good. I felt sorry for Sasuke, poor guy.

Please update soon! ^^
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I'll just read everything all over again. i love how spontaneous and believable you make their budding relationship.
person fyrbyrd
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Extremely happy to see this again. I had read what you had up before and this is one of my most favorite stories, so I really look forward to seeing any new chapter, and what you've done to the old as well. Thank you, thank you, thank you.