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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh!! Definitely interesting. I like the underlying sexual tension that was there. Really well written and great descriptive paragraphs. I can't wait till the next chapter :)
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back. I have wondered what happened to you and this great story. So you are redoing it huh? Well the first chapter is just as wonderful as it was the first time I read it. I'll keep an eye out for the redone chapters and can't wait for the new ones. Take care.
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok wow. i really want this to update. the relationship between both sasuke and naruto and the relationship between kakashi and iruka are great! i cant wait for more and i really hope you update soon so we can find out what happens next. so keep up the good work and udpate soon.
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have recently found this site and have been going over old archives. I must say that I have enjoyed this story so much more than any I have found yet here. It has the perfect mixture of Sasu/Naru and Iruka/Kashi. I so hope that you are planning to pick this back up. It's such a wonderful story. The plot is magnificent. Please let me know if you plan to do more with this.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story please update soon i'm really excited to read what happens next!!!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loooove this story! I hope its not forgotten in any way shape or form. I'm praying for an update in the near future.
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will finish this--you've left it in such an exciting moment too! I hope whatever is keeping you from writing stops it, and you can finish this. I loved the training parts, Ibiki in the laundry mat, and the way Iruka wants to prove himself to Kakashi. Sasuke sexing himself up to look like Itachi was a great touch also. I hope to read more someday, Thanks for all you have done!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope you update soon. its a good story and i love the mystery the love and the fight.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love the direction your story is going. I like the fact that they have obstacles, but still manage to be with each other. I look forward to your next update and, to me, this is one of the best Naruto fanfics. ;)
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I love it! The fighting scenes, the love scenes, everything is so bewitching it is truly amazing! When you had Sasuke act the traitor at the registration I almost died. You had me crying in rage and desesperation at both Naruto and Sasuke. Naruto for falling for the act and Sasuke for coming up with such a twisted stragety and making Naruto hurt so badly. It was really bad. I was so upset because they had barely started their relationship and then this happen. I thought it would be the end for sure. Or at least for a long while. Thank God that Naruto decided to confront Sasuke right away and that they kind of have made up. Mmm...who is going to be uke? Both of them seem to think that they are seme. It will be interesting to see hot that goes. Am truly curious about how Sasuke will react to the snakes and Naruto's to see that guy try to belittle Sasuke. It is going to be sooo much fun to have a protective Naruto in our hands. I'm so giddy with excitment you wouldnt believe it! Please update the story soon! When I started reading, I thought that it was already complete because of all the chapters. Oh well, just please update fast. I want to see why is Kakashi so worried, the fight between Kakashi, Naruto, and Sasuke. There will be a fight, right?
Thanks anyway for the great story!
Carla
Thanks anyway for the great story!
Carla