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by Erisabesu

person severedwings
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs deeply*...wow. This is...a-fucking-mazing! The story is very original...i LOVE IT! You've kept the characters in character for the most part, even when the times seemed verra OCC you nailed them perfectly!

But, I must say....I nearly fell right out of my chair laughing so hard. The poor Sensei having beenb drilled by the boyos on the birds and the bees....LOL. That was so refreshing! Please update soon, i truly hate it when authors abandon stories that have so much potential! Keep up the good work!

Ja,
SeveredWings
person HitsuFanGurl
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, please, please hurry!!! I just love this story, I like how you do different point of views during the same time of day for each character.....keep up the good work, and I'll be waiting for more!!!
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh it's been so long! i loooove this story, and i'm so glad you updated! i had forgotten about aoba, and weren't the princess and her lover planning to do something during the hunt, as well? well, i'm sure i'll find out at some point in the future. can't wait for the next chapter!
person Allys
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is soooo GOOD. I only started reading your story this week, so I was really REALLY happy when you updated yesterday. Your writing is incredible and the length of the chapters, excellent! I love the random japanese, I know a lot of people get annoyed, but I think it's nice, kinda like you're paying homage. My FAVOURITE is chapter 11 OMFG!!! I needed to lie down after, it was intense, loved the fight at the end, and usually I don't like the written fights, so it just increased my belief in your excellence. Not the mention fact that your relationships are sooo sweet, without being girly or cloying, have you noticed that I think you ROCK!!?? Anyway, keep up the good work!!! I'm looking forward to see what the hell is going on, it just keeps getting more and more complicated, but that in itself is amazing. Thanks for making my week :)
person Teodora
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.. this story is amazing!!!! i don't know if i reviewed it already but whatever. it's really great . hope you uptade sometime soon. this is by far the best one i have ever read. the best sex scenes. the best romance. the best comedy. the best everything. good job.
person Nomme de Plume
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mein gott! this is just like the best story! omg, it made me laugh, nearly cry, yell in outrage, gasp in shock, and i can't wait for the next chapter! i hope you update soon!
person kaesaku
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wai~
continue this, please!
..i really like it!
^^
person Kit
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please! Please! I love the way it is going. Could you try to finish it please?!?!?!?
person Inus_Kagome_Forever
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Everything's sooo cute! (just finished chapter nine) It was ::sigh:: good. lol, I don't think I would successfully be able to leave naruto's appartment if I were Sasuke! What is he thinking! I would... hehehehe, he's just so cute! How could you not! don't look at me like that j/k. Can't wait to read more!

Inus_Kagome_Forever
person Sir Magus
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! they made up im so happy!! i luv ur story its so cool! pls update soon!!!!