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for Everyone's Got Secrets

by Erisabesu

schedule March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sighs with relief* Finally figured out what was going on with the punctuation- Chapter 8 fixed! :)
person Monkey Lady
schedule March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet mother this is getting hot!!!! I can't wait for chapter 9! Yeah yeah yeah! >.<
person littleolmee
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah ha so you are on other web sites. guess i just hadn't found your story before. you might want to look at ch 8, you seem to have some problems with the alaphbet characters. really great story, looking forward to ch 9. keep up the great work, take care.
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its so cute
person W
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so great! Haha, Iruka was almost revealed... in front of his co-workers! I love your KakaIru, and I am not usually a fan of it. Naruto and Sasuke are finally stating their feelings, but it might take a while for them to fully act on them. Really great work! Looking forward to the rest! Please update soon!
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys! Since this site has been overcoming some technical difficulties, I havent been able to add Chapter 6. Chapter 6 HAS been updated on Fanfiction.net, so feel free to go there and tell me what you think! :) And if you didn't know, on that website this story is titled "Everyone's Got Secrets," because I couldn't decide on a title. So if you have an opinion on which title you like better, I'd love to hear it! Thanks to everyone who has taken a moment to review- we writers need lots of encouragement to keep those creative juices flowing, especially where SasuNaru and IruKaka are concerned. So much hotness...so little time....

-Erisabesu ;*
person Kira
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update!!! this story amd the one on FF.net (the same one as this) both havnt been updated, and you need to update them!!! ive been waiting for what seems like forever!!!!!! T_T

>your beloved reveiwer, Kira<
person Briryan
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!) Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
person melfina
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Your K/I is very cute ^_^ Please continue
person blisblop
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet.Your descriptions are so carefully crafted.Its a pleasure to read it.Sigh.Sasuke's house sounds beautiful and he can speak of Itachi without loosing it .Wonderful.A truely wonderful begining..I love the way Naruto is being forward,they are both brave this way.