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February 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like the Gaara/Moegi idea. Right after, I skimmed through your story list for the pairing. But alas, it was nowhere to be found. *siiiigh*
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November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The hot scenes were great, the characters you gave to Sasu and Naru seemed opposite to what we read in manga but somehow it really worked... I'm not sure about Moegi, I wouldn't add her to the story - the whole Sasuke-asking-for-help is one thing that was totally unconvincing. I'm sure he would find a way to lure vixen into his house on his own.
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. The boys don't seem to be quite in character, so to speak, but I'm not really sure if that's a bad thing or not. My only real suggestion is in regards to the way you write everyone's names, with the comma that doesn't need to be there. Yeah, I'm annoying like that :-p Otherwise, wonderful job!
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just re-read this fic again and I need to let you know how much I fell in love all over once more. Beautifully written and so romantic in the end. I wish this fic would never finish. Thanks for this wonderful treat! :D
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sooo loved that!! Great work!
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well someone was bound to have a fetish for Naruto's belly. Might as well be Sasuke.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was AWESOME!! i love your stories but, as you already know, the grammer needs work. so, with the exception of my waste of words, I absolutely LOVED this story! and please do continue on with that extremely rare pairing.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! I liked it . . . even if it was a little unconventional. BLEH! Who wants conventional? I would seriously like to read more on the moegi/gaara thing you mentioned. I think it could work out quite well. Just think of their children . . . . Heh.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
helo great job I loved it. My brother had an obsessions with stomachs strange. I would think Sasuke an ass man... oh well.
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this fic. Dame naruto can be so think headed sometimes lol, well plz make more