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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very, VERY good story.
i really have to admit, your story is by far one of the best i have read in all of my life. i love your writing style, and the way you charecterize the charecters. Inncocent Naruto has always made perfect sense to me, and freaky, obsessive, stalkerish Sasuke seemed to be perfect. the storyline of the story is great, just focusing on the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke, and the thoughts of each of them help with the story as well. i have to say awsome story, and keep up the good work. Also, update soon, even though it may be difficult with your normal life, just don't forget about this story.
P.S. I also have to say nice job on your One-Shot Sasuke and Naruto fanfictions, write more of them if you can
i really have to admit, your story is by far one of the best i have read in all of my life. i love your writing style, and the way you charecterize the charecters. Inncocent Naruto has always made perfect sense to me, and freaky, obsessive, stalkerish Sasuke seemed to be perfect. the storyline of the story is great, just focusing on the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke, and the thoughts of each of them help with the story as well. i have to say awsome story, and keep up the good work. Also, update soon, even though it may be difficult with your normal life, just don't forget about this story.
P.S. I also have to say nice job on your One-Shot Sasuke and Naruto fanfictions, write more of them if you can
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is beautiful... Though the Obsession is pretty over the edge. ^^''
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I think Gaa/Moe would be worth reading, it's never been done as far as I know. I am interested.
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG *_* *spasms* HOT *_* I loved it, and such an awesome smex scene ^^ *glomps*
I can't wait to read more from you ^^
Liah xx
I can't wait to read more from you ^^
Liah xx
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull story! Can't wait to read more of your other stories.
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great!!! Loved it!!! That was really hot....and wet.....
***~blush~*****
***~blush~*****
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May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh this fic is soooo good, it's light and sweet and funny and i LOVE sasuke's obsession with naruto's belly!!!! all the talk about it makes ME want a narubelly to nuzzle!! ahh let's see... a few of the things i remember that i wanted to mention loving:
moegi being all gung-ho for a sasuke/naruto fanclub, and arguing with the sasuke fangirls; and then telling naruto to read some romance novels, and him ACTUALLY DOING IT!! lmao!! shikamaru thinking they were so troublesome and should just screw and get it over with nyahaa!! ah and this: It hurt and confusingly enough, it felt good. What a strange thing, a hurt that felt good. --that is actually a pretty good description of how love feels, esp in the beginning ^__^
then, moegi and sasuke's going in cahoots to get sasuke to win naruto!! lol that is great.. but i wonder if there's going to be trouble now since it seems kakashi thinks naruto knows about his mission... oh yeah! and gaara just flirting with naruto to rile up sasuke=GOLD!! i LOVE comically-jealous sasuke XD
and of course, finally, chapter 6 and sasuke FINALLY gets to lick that belly and "milk" naruto (lol) ahh soooo gooood! i can't WAIT for moorrrrreee!!
~ lg
moegi being all gung-ho for a sasuke/naruto fanclub, and arguing with the sasuke fangirls; and then telling naruto to read some romance novels, and him ACTUALLY DOING IT!! lmao!! shikamaru thinking they were so troublesome and should just screw and get it over with nyahaa!! ah and this: It hurt and confusingly enough, it felt good. What a strange thing, a hurt that felt good. --that is actually a pretty good description of how love feels, esp in the beginning ^__^
then, moegi and sasuke's going in cahoots to get sasuke to win naruto!! lol that is great.. but i wonder if there's going to be trouble now since it seems kakashi thinks naruto knows about his mission... oh yeah! and gaara just flirting with naruto to rile up sasuke=GOLD!! i LOVE comically-jealous sasuke XD
and of course, finally, chapter 6 and sasuke FINALLY gets to lick that belly and "milk" naruto (lol) ahh soooo gooood! i can't WAIT for moorrrrreee!!
~ lg
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the hottest things i have ever read!!! I have to know what happens next! I hope naru says he loves sasuke! please update soon!!!!!!!!
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Update soon!
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! Great job! this is great! the way you describe their emotions is genius! Excellent work! please continue soon!