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for Belly Obsession

by Trollmia

person Mystie
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah!!!!!!! u evil evil person!!
T_T please update soon! don't stop there
hmm.......by where you stopped, i'm guessing there's a lemon coming
only if Naruto would cooperate.
awwww poor-Naru-chan is in for a big surprise!
*evil laughter* yes,please do continue
person Kellie
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter is me on the edge! And Naruto in denial is so cute! Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^ Keep up the great writing :)
person Mija
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg you have to update update soon please??? pretty please with big sparkly hopefully pitiful looking puppy eyes of doom that you will not be able to resist??...sigh, it never works for me either Moegi..ok loving this fic, totally, I like how Gaara doesnt like Naru in THAT way but loves to mess with Sasukes head, oh God that was totally good, bad Gaara bad panda boy hehe gotta love him, and oooh man is Sasuke gonna finally molest, I mean confess his love to Naru baby??? cant wait for more totally love this fic, great work, hope to see more soon, till then huggls and smiles Mija...:-)
person Liah
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha XD I cant wait for the next chapter, this is really good ^_^ I wonder how Gaara will react when he finds out what Sasuke is up to? ^^; Update soon please *glomps* I LOVE this XD
person Briryan
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!) It is getting really good. Funny too. Looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to read the look on Naruto face.
person blue_genjutsu
schedule March 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww can't wait to see them get together! :)
person ladywolfTerri
schedule March 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good so far!!... I can't wait to read more!!
person Stupidity Unleashed
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why, hello there again^^ Lol. What can I say? I like your writing style. I have to admit, I've never read a fic about Sasuke obsessing over Naruto's belly. Hehe...belly. It sounds so childish when Sasuke says it! I can't help but laugh! Cheers to this ficy!!
person kik
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just re-read the second chapter (well first and second) and i really, really want to to hope to it and write LOTS more XD


Hurry i want to know what happenes next!!!!
person belovedthefool
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHHHHH YES! Nice going! Really enjoyed reading these two chapters. PLEASE update for my sanity!