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for Belly Obsession

by Trollmia

person AJAngelique
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE!!!!
person Kiara
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! I really liked it! Please, update soon!
person pK
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For the cliffie i am considering murder. However this is to damn funny
person ce
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think this is a funny story i can't wait to read the rest.

see ya
person Tekko
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaai~cliffhanger!!! T__T I love this fic! Sasuke's obsession and his and Gaara 'fued' are very amusing! Write more? Please? *sends hearts and Pocky and angsty Sasuke*
person brittany
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great! Update, i wanna see what happens in naruto's house*evil smirk*... i already have on idea of what might happen.*evil sniker*
person Isis-amataeru
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg I wuff you xDD it's so hotttt more!! I totally support ur story! U write with such detail and I'm just totally engrossed in teh story @w@ squeee great work! ¢¾
person Karesu
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Karesu: *rampages though her house* DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT!
Papaya: Whats wrong now?
Karesu: *stands still and starts to cry* Papaya! Its horrible! I CANT FIND THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Papaya: Um... could that because its not writen yet?
Karesu: NEVER!
Papaya: But...
Karesu: N-E-V-E-R!!!!!!!!!!!
Papaya: Okay then... But supose it was that...?
Karesu: Then the author will die VERY SOON
Papaya: Okay then... that idea has been ruled out... what if they spaced putting it up?
Karesu: Oh, okay then.. I will have to politely remind them then! UPDATE THE DAMN STORY BITCH!
Papaya: Yes Karesu, how nice you are.... *sigh*
person sweet
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh!
i love it
please continue
person Kagaya
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear darling naive mislead Naruto.

You are going to be eaten up by Sasuke at this rate you are going.

I think you should try reading Shirohane's work cause its also mainly about a very Seme Sasuke eating up (or bullying) a very Uke Naruto.
Though in your stories, Naruto still has a semblance of a spine. http://shirohane.co.nr/ this is Shirohane's website. Sweet fluffy stories if you like them.