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for Belly Obsession

by Trollmia

person KinOfDragons
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uwah! A shout out!! XD!!!!!!!! I loved this chapter...Poor Naru-chan is so dense. *sigh* If only he knew how many BEAUTIFUL and SEXY MEN were after him...That'd be fun, ne? ;D
person jazzy
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that is something a, belly obsession?! that is a truly ingenious plot device. I really like it and it's hilarious and cool all at once. Please write another chapter soon or two or three even would be great. I think this story is cute and zaney.
person shadowolf
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it I just love this story please contnue maybe it will turn into a treesome runs off giggling and blushing
person Fallen Dragon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol nice premise! Update soon! I like the gaara and sasuke action fighting for Naruto lol.
person MidnightMoon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, aw thats really cute and I just can't wait for the smut to ensue. Its really good so far so keep writing real soon!
person krickets
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha ha sorry i forgot to review yesterday thats not like me....

this fic is GREAT! its so funny you throw in humor in all the right places

i cant wait to see what comes out in the next installment.

that person has some pretty funny cartoons
person losthimagain
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ I really want to know what happends next so please do update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
person Jesse
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HIuehieuheieuh This is SUCH a good idea! And you are really talented!! I hope you update soon! I just started to read naruto fics and i'm kind of obcessed with this pairing! Hugs!
person naruke
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm... I think that i smell smex coming up... While waiting that, would you please update? FOR PETE'S SAKE, I'M ASKING ON MY KNEES: PLEASE CONTIUNE!!
person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start. :D Keep it coming.

-Ryu <3