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for Belly Obsession

by Trollmia

schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, real nice story so far.
person dragon_prankster
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is getting interesting! maybe it could have been more sasunaru, but it´s good! keep up the good work!
person loshimagain
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me like ^^!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Xd (look I can touch my nose) XD

-The Update Monster
person ShinigamiTaishou
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! Hope to see more again, it's a cute story. See ya!
person rachi
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh... I'm very much loving this story at the moment. Please update soon, as I cannot get enough of reading!!

^-^

rachi
person Gaiame-chan
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GYAHH! So cuuuute :) I can't wait for moooore *blushes* it's so wonderful <333!

~Gaiame-chan
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
doesn't want sasuke to see what he's reading? a bit too late for that, ne? CX update!
person KinOfDragons
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....Poor Gaara-sama's going to lose, isn't he....;o; *cries* Maybe Naru could just keep the both of them....~<3 Anyway! I loved the story. It was very amusing. =p Update soon! XD ((PS: Use flour on your beta. They hate the stuff! >=D ))
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the belly obsession sasuke has sounds kinda scary... hot! but scary...
person kenz
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute ^-^