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for Through the Ages

by tsukisan

person miko of sins
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this story so far. keep updating
person DrakenD4
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great, please continue. ^-^
person wendyghost
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is such a good chapter, i hope u continue with the story
person ranni
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start... Hope to see more soon!
person Anon
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo00ooo seems intersting !! Update soon!! ^_^b
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This a great beginning. I hope to see more of this to get a better perspective on how their relationship develops. I also agree with the other reviewer. I hope you don't hold your story hostage based on reviews. I think it is worthy reading and that you should continue. I hope to see more of this story. ---anon food
person ren
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it, it was really great. so please continue on with the story.
person Reyn
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I find the idea of hearing a half-asleep Naruto say 'okay, Mr. Moon' is downright hilarious, followed by the 'thud' of him missing the pillow. But oh well. After reading this first chapter I find myself highly intrigued and I hope that you will update soon. It's amazing how much depth you've given Sasuke's feelings with so little actual insight to his character. A job well done.
person Trekiael
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha, please, don't write only in fonction of the number of reviews you get. I personally love The Uchiha Stranger so far and it would be sad if you stop it. As for this one, well, nice beginning. I'm always happy to see new SasuNaru fanfic as it's my fav pairing ever (I have nothing against NejiNaru, but I prefer NejiGaara and I hate GaaraNaru) and there is less and less SasuNaru fics these times. And, yes, I think Sasuke is a very possessive person, and with Naruto it's simply hot and Naruto's reactions are often cute. So, yeah, please, I don't care (too much) if you don't update too soon but please, continue and finish it! And I don't really like Orochimaru, so, if Sasuke killed him, that's good for me. I don't like Hinata either. Why everybody love her? She's so annoying! I hate the kind of girl who is so shy and seemgly cute with a lot of courage, it doesn't seem bad the way I describe it, but, well, Hinata's kind, so, why nobody want some Hinata bashing when we all know that a possessive Sasuke would love to do just that? Too cruel? How can anybody want to bash her? I do! Cuteness should only go for Naru-chan! I'm rambling. Oh, and you can call the moon Tsuki-san, I don't know for english or american, but in France we don't give a name to the moon, but I know that japanese tend to do this kind of thing (they call the Fuji montain Fuji-san, but I'm sure you know that). Erm, lot of non-sense babbling in this review, but more interesting things on the actual chapter in the next! Good luck! Ja ne!
person Hakudoushi is kawaii
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you must continue this or else I'll die...*okay not die, but I'll be very sad*