rate_review Reviews

This might be your first fanfic, but it is better than some of the ones that have been writing fanfics for a while. Your story line is really good.

oh, I love your story, it's so sweet and pretty ^__^ I followed your fic on ffnet and was nearly heartbroken when I didn't find it, but smart as I am (...err hehe that COULD be discussed ^^;;) I searched here, on aff :3 yaay! but I have little patience see, I really wanna know what happened to them after they left (or were they just leaving??), so please, update fast *puppy eyes*

I love this story i fell sorry for sas mom i cant wait till sas finds out naruto is a shinobi update soon

*cough* *cough* .......you said there are 11 complete chapters, ne? ............... well? where are they?? This story is really kawaii. I'm glad I decided to take a look at it. It's cute, and fun, yet you're really staying with the characters and their respective titles (shinobi/samurai). The way the story is written as well as the great lines tossed in, it's easy to ignore the grammar errors. Looks like you're just stuck on a few things cuz they get repeated...which helps in the sense that now i know what it is you're saying :p

So, anyways, I was laughin my ass off the majority of this fic thus far, and would read the parts I liked outloud to my roommate as I was..laughing. I particularly enjoyed the frog bit, the koi bit, and now, the bath bit *smirks*

I look forward to what will be happening next...and hope 6-11 are posted sooooon!! So keep up the good work, and if you are in need of a beta just hit me up on yahoo messenger *look at email addy* *grins*

Mata ja!

Houseki

-_- what an evil place to leave off at

oh my! sorry to hear bout u being banned thats absolutely retarded i've read this story of ff.net and it was not too violent i've read alot worse on that site *fumes in anger* but what can u do i'm glad ur posting it here now i checked it yesterday and almost freaked when it was gone :s i hope you don't have to start from scratch :s that would be aweful, please update soon its just that i've already read what u have written b4 and am an impatient person :P but this is one of my favorite stories out there! yeah so great start and hope to see this story in its original glory soon :P

not bad, update soon.

I'm sorry for you to hear that ffnet had deleted your fic. It's so a great story. Hope that you have the other chapters on your computer, otherwise poor you, if you have to retype it. Anyway, I'm happy to see that you're posting this fic here. I'll look here now. So continue your excellent work! See ya!

Ohh, you have something nice going here...
I'm not that hard to please... give me romantic Sasuke/Naruto and I can go all day :)