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for Demon Children

by wrathchylde

schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, the story line seems to be coming along nicely. Please continue! Thank you for a great story.
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for a very long time for a fic that contains the introduction of the other jinchiriki. I can't tell you how happy I am that you've started what could possibly be a very entertaining epic (with Saku+Naru, always nice to see). Please update! It has great potential!
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess there's no point in hoping for an update to this huh? Other than a possible Naru/Saku I don't know what the pairings are for this either.
person commisar of the books
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo this fic is great!!! please please update!!! dont leave this story unfinished!!!
person JB
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story hope to hear more from you. I like the story of demon children and gald that Sakura didn't hate him for not telling her about his secret about the Kyubii inside of him. Hope to see an update from you when you get a chance.
person rasengan2006
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story plz upload more asap!!!
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah updates!!!
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah an update! It's very intresting how there is two two tailed demons!
person kimahrigirl
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for more Gaara! This was a little bit of a slow chapter but I did enjoy the story of the two demons!
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chap update soon