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I have enjoyed it so far. Hope that you will finish it. I am a BIG Kakashi and Sakura fan. Can't wait to read the rest.

I know that you haven't worked on this in a long time, but is there any chance that you'll finish it? I really want to continue reading!

oooh, very nice. More soon? this is absolutely and tunnel-vision level intriguing.

dude, i freakin love this story. (haha, sorry, i was just reading something else very 'valley-esque.') I hope you pick this back up now that you're done with Wet Nightmare. This has definitely got an interesting twist on the KakaSaku plot and I like where you're taking it. It'll be fun to see how you actually get Sakura to break down and ask the man (unless - and i don't really see this happening, but hey, not my story - he takes pity and comes out of his emotionally stunted shell and offers? haha), not to mention his accepting. Oooh, the ensuing mayhem. Definitely a chuckle to read so far.

Where's the next chapter? I'd love to read more-- I was a little skeptical in the beginning but I really like how you're taking the story so far. Surprisingly good approach to Sakura's characterization in a situation like this, which is pretty hard to imagine for her. The stuff with Kakashi so far has been execellent (although I can't really see her getting drunk that way, I understand the plot device it served), especially with his frankness and then checking up on her. The reasoning surrounding her potential attraction to him is sound, too. I also liked the Kiba stuff; he was a good character choice for her first attempt, and you wrote the scene believably.

This fanfic is a delight-- much better so far than most of the fic on this website. Update soon!

A very good story, I can't wait for more!

Great story. I wasn't too surprised that Sakura didn't go through with "the deed" with Kiba, even though he seems like a nice guy. Since you mention Genma in this chapter, I'm wondering if you're going to have a certain ninja rescue her from Genma and his..."oral fixations". Although...Kakashi might have a few of his own! Can't wait for the next chapter. I don't know if you have an update e-mail going out to people, but I'd love to be informed when you update. Happy Late Halloween. Jen

I like the story. You've got a good start, so please update soon.

aw, poor kiba... just left hanging like that. she could at least have given him a hand job or something... anyway, nice chapter. perhaps in the next installment she will figure out that kakashi is who she is really wanting! keep up the good work!

omg that scene with shikamaru was so funny. I would have loved to see his expression if Sakura had actually asked.
PLEASE have sakura try and talk to other guys. Like Kiba and Neji. Even if we know she's gonna end up with Kakashi
those scenes would probably be very amusing.