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PLEASE DO NOT REMOVE THIS FIC!!....*blushes cutely* ....um...the story's too good to let it end like that *bows politely, hands out narusasu cookies and then hides in a closet* ^.^

For possible chapter titles (if you continue) maybe have hazards that could be out there, like wild animals, or the equipment that a survivalist would have that would be clost to neccessary (Toilet Paper?! XP), or if it was a rocky area that Survivalist-person is, uh, surviving in you could have a rock slide warning. Hmm, I can't really think of anything else that might be helpful or anything as I know nothing about what would be the best kind of thing to know. Shelter of some sort.
I can't say that I'd be "woah wtf" if you deleted this story, but I've only just read it in one sitting and most likely don't have the same attachment as a peron who followed it from the first chapter. But, on the other hand, you can always put it on Hiatus until you figure out how to continue it. I think that it really does have a lot of potential to be continued on for awhile longer and that you shouldn't delete it, but ultimately, the choice is yours. Good luck on doing whatever it is that you decide to do with the story.
Oh, and in Chapter 5 in the Author's Note, I really like the whole "we only get to meet uber-wrath Kyuubi." I thought that was funny. (Yeah, I know that this had nothing to do with the actual story. Sorry. >_>) And sorry that I didn't really comment on the story much, but to me it just seems like it's at a good pace, and it's interesting how Sasuke seems somewhat defeated emotionally and not being "emo"-ish.

I am *totally* waiting on you to finish this! It's very well written! I would write more and give a proper critique but I need to be somewhere five minutes ago! Pleeeease don't delete this story!

I would most definitely be disappointed if you discontinued/deleted this fic. I think it's well written and intriguing. So...please continue. No pressure (haha). Thanks for what you've written so far and for sharing with us all!

oh gawd nooooooooo!!!! dun delete it!!!!!!! its too good of a fic..! plus it was just starting to get good w/naruto and sasuke!!! u can start another fic if u want to, since u're so good at it. but plzzzzzzzz maybe finish this one..? *inserts-puppy-eyes-here* ^_^

luurrrrrrrrves yuhz!!

- meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

please dont delete this fic. I was really looking forward to reading more. I want to see what happens. Its really good.
Tsukiyomi

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! dnt delete this fic its really good an i like it i would be sad to see it go*cries an runs to corner at thought* pls dnt delete it!!! take ur time try to workin on a different story if u dnt have any thoughts for this one-i usually watch t.v. or listen to music or read other fanfics if i cant figure out wat to do. if its really bad i write a different fic an it helps me come up wit ideas to write bout so just take some time off an it will come to u k? pls dont delete it!!!!

No, Please don't delete it! I really injoy this and I like where it's going! Please, please, please, Don't delete it!

I really like this fic. Please don't delete it! T_T